palkoN pe rukey ashq chupaaney ki khaatiR

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

reet May 25, 2006, 5:05am 1

**apney aana ke khudaa ko manaaney ki khaatiR
wo khafaa ho gaya mujhey sataaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waqt ki thokar sey bachna zaraa
kehneY laga tum na aana mujhey uthaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha mujh sey bichaR kaR tum kesey jiyo ge!
kehne laga meiN jeeyuN ga ab zamaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha dooR jaa kaR gaR tanhaa ho gae to!
kehne laga tum na aana mujehy behlaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waapsi ke daR khuley rehney dena
kehneY laga kon jaata hey laot aaney ki khaatiR!

meiN ney kaha phir bhi chaaho tau palat aana tum
kehney laga nahi aaooN ga tumhey paaney ki khaatiR

magar mila barsoN ke baad to kitna haNsna paRaa
usey palkoN pe rukey ashq chupaaney ki khaatiR**

farooqahmad May 25, 2006, 10:25am 2

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Nice one Reet!

kabir1 May 25, 2006, 11:14am 3

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just great

thanks for sharing

Prince_Ali May 25, 2006, 3:30pm 4

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Zabardast :k:

Sannan May 26, 2006, 2:50am 5

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wah wah reet super ..... keep it up

sara_farooqui May 26, 2006, 3:03am 6

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Ahhhaa,,,Wahh,, Reet

reet May 26, 2006, 8:27am 7

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farooqahmad
kabir
Prince Ali
Sannan
sara farooqui

thnx to everyone for liking it…

nakhan May 27, 2006, 7:56am 8

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Wow zabardast Reet...

mahamkhan May 27, 2006, 8:47am 9

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very nice....Reet

reet May 28, 2006, 4:40am 10

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nakhan & maham

thnx to both of you............!

being_lonely May 28, 2006, 11:01am 11

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**meiN ney kaha waqt ki thokar sey bachna zaraa
kehneY laga tum na aana mujhey uthaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha mujh sey bichaR kaR tum kesey jiyo ge!
kehne laga meiN jeeyuN ga ab zamaaney ki khaatiR**

*bohat khooob reet *

Bewafai May 29, 2006, 3:05am 12

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Wahh Reet ji,, Buhat khoob

reet June 4, 2006, 5:16am 13

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Beinglonely & Bewafai

thnx to both of you for liking........!

decent_Felow June 5, 2006, 3:09am 14

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                                             bahot khoobb........!

jhansi_ki_rani June 5, 2006, 5:06am 15

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bohaaaat khoooob reet sahiba/saheb

umda zoq hai aap ka , or hamara b qk ham ney isey pasand kiyaa....

Special Offer: Send a rose

reet June 7, 2006, 5:01am 16

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D F & *J R *

thnx to both of you liking.......!