paish-e-khiyaal tha koii,hum ne Qadam barha deye.. ..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR August 20, 2006, 2:44pm 1

* tu ne tu aye rafeeQ-e-jaaN, aur hii gul khila deye bakhya-garii k shouQ mien, zakhm naye laga deye

dast-e-hawaa ne rait per, pehle banaye raasteyy
phir mere ghar k raasteyy, ghar se tere mila deye

kitnii thii ajnabii fiza, pehley pehel firaaQ mien
durd k ishtiraaQ ne, dost naye bana deye

aamad-e-yaar kii khabR sun ker, hum ehl-e-shouQ ne
palko`N se gurd saaf kii, rasteyy mien dil bicha deye

aakhrii sung-e-meel tuk, saNs ukhaR chalii magr
paish-e-khiyaal tha koii, hum ne Qadam barha deye

pocha tha kia pasand haii, tum ko merii biyaaZ mien
us ne judaiyo`N k shairr, chun k mujhe suna deye

ik sitam zareef ne, subh-e-tarb k naam per
apna chiraagh chor ker, sub k deeye bujha deye
*

IS August 20, 2006, 3:06pm 2

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:-D
nice **
**thanks for sharing

SindSagar August 20, 2006, 3:20pm 3

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**Excellent!!!:) **

HeArT_HaCKeR August 20, 2006, 3:49pm 4

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thanks innocent-smile nd sindsagar

GuL-e-Tasbeeh August 22, 2006, 10:06am 5

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Buhat khoob HH , thanks for sharing this piece , i read this before , lekin har bar parhnay ka maza ata hay:-)

Sannan August 22, 2006, 11:14am 6

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welldone H.H... buhat khubsurat ghazal share key aap nay ......

Amal August 22, 2006, 11:35am 7

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Hmmm…finally someone posed it after such a long time. Pehley hum ney ki thi :~) HeArT HaCKeR, thanx for sharing it with us, lovely ghazal :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR August 22, 2006, 3:59pm 8

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thanks for liking GUl nd sannan.

oh, i dint know that. mae ne tu ye first time parhii apne bhai kii diary mein. anywayz, thanks for replying.

how long can u leekspin?

jonaid August 22, 2006, 7:00pm 9

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[quote=HeArT HaCKeR]

pocha tha kia pasand haii, tum ko merii biyaaZ mien
us ne judaiyo`N k shairr, chun k mujhe suna deye

very nice

lutfullah August 22, 2006, 7:40pm 10

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I deleted that reply ...cuz guppies complained.:)

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HeArT_HaCKeR August 22, 2006, 8:08pm 11

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thanks jonaid.

mujhe pata hota tu post na ker deti:halo:

reet August 23, 2006, 4:15am 12

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**kitnii thii ajnabii fiza, pehley pehel firaaQ mien
durd k ishtiraaQ ne, dost naye bana deye

pocha tha kia pasand haii, tum ko merii biyaaZ mien
us ne judaiyo`N k shairr, chun k mujhe suna deye**

very lovely sharing........HH...thnx....!

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Precious_Khan August 23, 2006, 7:52am 13

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Buhat Khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke August 24, 2006, 12:54am 14

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bohut khoob!!

HeArT_HaCKeR August 24, 2006, 10:50am 15

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thankyou thankyou.

homer_j_simpson August 24, 2006, 11:01am 16

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nice :k:

Test your knowledge!

NikamiJano August 24, 2006, 10:34pm 17

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pocha tha kia pasand haii, tum ko merii biyaaZ mien
us ne judaiyo`N k shairr, chun k mujhe suna deye

one of my fav :)

kaleemhk August 25, 2006, 3:14am 18

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Very nice........ :)

HeArT_HaCKeR August 25, 2006, 11:24am 19

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shukriya !

mahamkhan August 25, 2006, 12:36pm 20

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very nice.......!