PAIGHAAM

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bhejay ga mujhay mulaqaat ka paighaam kabhi socha nah tha
aay gi meri zindagi mein bhi yeh sham kabhi socha nah tha

teri mehfel main tu shareek rehtay thay hamesha hum

aay ga hum tak bhi dour-e- jaam kabhi socha nah tha

zamane ne diya tujh ko khitab be wafai ka
aay ga hum par bhi yeh ilzam kabhi socha nah tha

qisse sune tu thay heer ranhjhe ke laila majnoon ke

aay ga hamara bhi in mein naam kabhi socha nah tha

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Re: PAIGHAAM

*simply amazing...but in middle of this peom i think apnay point se hiti hai not much though just a little I think agr little bit edit ki jaye tou would me much nicer :) *

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Re: PAIGHAAM

chak day phatty :nuch:

wot is dur-e-jaam though :hmmm:
neva heard it before

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Re: PAIGHAAM


PASAND KARNE KA BAHUT SHUKRIYA . JI AAP NE SAHI KAH AIK SHER KAMZOR HHEY DEKHO TRY KARONGA KEH TASIH KAR SAKOON
TNX A LOT

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Re: PAIGHAAM

BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA JI AAP NE PASAND FARMA KAR MERI HOSLA AFZAI KI .DUR E JAAM . JAB SAQI BARI BARI SAB KO JAAM BHAR BHAR KAR DETA HEY ..USS WAQT DUR E JAAM BOLTE HEIN WAISE YEH SIERF AIK ISTEHARA KE TUR PAR USE KIYA JAA HEY ..PAIMANA GARDISH MEIN AA JANA ETC .
THNX AGAIN

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Re: PAIGHAAM

ooooooh u mean dour-e-jaam ...

i thought thats wot it was but wasnt sure if you intentionally spelled it taht way or not.

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Re: PAIGHAAM


oh thnx for spelling correction . in roman urdu/hindi
i think spelling not counts but now i agree wid you next time i will be care full it is dour-e-jaam ,
aap tu sachi muchi de chacha ghaleb hi ho .
thnx

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Re: PAIGHAAM

nahin maqsad ghalti nikalnaa ya mazaak uRaana nahin tha... sirf clarify karnaa chahtaa tha

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Re: PAIGHAAM

mein umeed rakhta hoon aap aeinda bhi meri rehnumai farmaein ge . shukriya jiiii bahut bahut .

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