Wo larki shayad pagal thi,
Din raat hi gumsum rehti thi,
Kuch sharm-o-haya ka paikar thi,
Kuch narm mizaj rakhti thi,
Ankhon mai neem nasha sa tha,
Baaton sy dewani lagti thi,
Humraz na tha uska koi,
Bass khuda sy baatein karti thi,
Ik shaam ke anchal mai aksar,
Jazbat chupaye rakhti thi,
Darti thy juda ho janey se,
Ya pyar se shayad darti thi,
Kya sabar tha us dewani ka,
Kya zabt-e-mohabat rakhti thi,
Hai rashk mujhy us pagal pe,
Kya khoob mohabat karti thi,
Wo larki shayad pagal thi,
Kya khoob mohabat karti thi..
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nice 
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kis se mohabbat karti thi
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:k: hoti hain aisi pagal bhi
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Ek larki thi deewani si kya khub muhabbat rakhti thi
shayad us ko kuch kehn tha najaney kis se darti thi…
Aray 
bhai ussey thaper se nahi pyaar se dar lagta hai:D
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laton k bhoot baton se nahin manty
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Why my comment deleted???? Is this really a poetry? Cant i raise this questions? Or only praising comments are allowed?
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Why my comment deleted???? Is this really a poetry? Cant i raise this questions? Or only praising comments are allowed?
everyone got right to post what he/she likes. If you don't like anything, don't discourage other posters to post what they like.
expressing your views is allowed, but being harsh and rude with other posters is not allowed.
Happy posting :)
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everyone got right to post what he/she likes. If you don't like anything, don't discourage other posters to post what they like.
expressing your views is allowed, but being harsh and rude with other posters is not allowed.
Happy posting :)
Then that should be a separate topic "lines called poetry" will serve the purpose...and regarding harsh is ur thinking...but criticality is other thing...which unfortunately u didn't understand here
Happy posting means only happy comments
Happy posting
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If you got any concerns, let us know in PMs, but discouraging other posters with smilies like 
will not be allowed further.
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mere khayal mein to yeh poetry hi hai
but any how smile plz:hugz: