Pagal Jogan!

Just venting some thoughts… its not exactly poetry just a few feelings from my heart.

Koi dua… Koi lafz mohabbat ka…
kuch harf he gar innayat kertay…
Uss hijr zada rooh ko…
Itnay kalay mosam main…
Tanhayee kay khaar chun-nay wali
Bayrooh si aankhain…
Khushk hoont, rookhay baloon wali
Wu pagal si jogan!

Har rahi main ek tumhi ko daikhnay wali
Phir mati main apni kismat khojnay lagti hay!
Tum say rooth janay wali!
Bay-manii si baat pay dair tuk hasnay wali…
Aksar ronay wali
Wu pagal si jogan!

Hijr ki tareekiyoon main lipti hui
Uski munjamid aahein…
Abb thamnay wali hain..
Uski wehshat-zada si aankhain…
bujhnay wali hain…
Kur’lataay huway intizar ki sansaain
ghatnay wali hay!
Baghair mosam ki khizaan tulnay wali hay

Wu mitti main milnay wali hain…

Haan abb wu marnay wali hay…

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Oye kaki dont the make me sad

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not to be so sad ji

cheer up :)

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Sowey boss! just a lil upset...

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Thanks, I will try to keep my chin up!

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ahcha likka hai :)

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Very nice poem.. Kaaaki :)

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very nice Fara.

here comes if it is alright with you:

iss kee apni gurbet per taras kha, aye jogan,
wohh aik shema howa, derra huwa,
na mukamil sa, pareshaan babu,
rah dhoondh ker, batekh chuka
itna bhee samney aa ker nahi **
**khe saka:

'bibi maaf ker!'
Iss ko janey dey, kheire mananey dey,
ke phir kaheen kabhi
jeb lowt ker aya wohh,
tow tujh ko payey ga waheen,
jehan chowr ker giya ho ga
teb,
iss ko khe deina,
'wapas a giya babu,
beithe araam ker, aur phir chaley jana,
apna dil bher ley theise (hurt, humiliation) kee
chavaniyoon sey, **
**yey jhilmil jo meirey kashkol mey hein - seb yadein teiree

tu ney mujhey galet jana, bey kar jana
chel, ubb ja tu, apney weran zameer key shehr mey
basa koe abadi apni zaat kee immaaret ki,
abhee abhee jo paya tu ney
pheley hota wohh ehsas
tow sotchta rehey ga tu,
kiya na acha hota?

best,

Dushwari

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ap ka to kehna hai k dard acha nahi hota but iss nazm say to dard k sailaab nikal rahay hain

i like 1st two parts
rest is horrible

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very nice, I have to say. Please post more of your stuff here Fara. I am looking forwad to it.

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nice effort keep it up:)

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Thanks everybody for appreciating my random thoughts. It wasn't exactly an effort to write poetry, just my thoughts simply from my heart. Allah aap subko khush rakhay. ameen

Fara

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hummm jogan ka jog

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Another good piece fara ji :k: … i think you should write reqularly. Achi khaasi jaan hey is nazm meiN… struggling writers like me should learn from you :slight_smile:

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Ji ji baja irshaad farmaya aap nay... struggling writers like u... Allah ray inkisaari..

I do like this poem of mine but their isn't anything special about it... phir bhee pasandeedgi kay liye apka bayhud shukriya..

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inkisaari to aap dikha rahi heiN... thanx for the links by the way :)

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Thanks so much, I am still highly flattered with your comments in post 14! :D