Paani paani kar gayee

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Paani paani kar gayee mujh ko qalandar ki ye baat
Tu agar maira nahi banta na ban apna to ban

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

yeh she’r yuN honaa chaahiye:

paanii paanii kar gaii mujhko auntie kii yeh baat
tu agar WENDY kaa nahiiN bantaa na ban, SUE kaa to ban! :cb: :smiley: :wink:

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

:smack:

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

I think you missquoted the shair. Is not it ..

PANI PANI KAR GAYEE MUJH KO QALANDAR KI YEH BAAT

TU JHUKA JAB GHAIR KAI AAGAY, NA TAN TERA NA MANN

APNAY MANN MAI DOOB KAR PAA JA SURAAGH E ZINDAGI

TU AGAR MERA NAHIN BANTA, NA BAN, APNA TAU BAN

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

:lajawab: Thanks for complete ashaar

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

u r rite

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

waisay, does not this statement coming from Qalandar, makes him sound little errrm shady?

Tu agar maira nahi banta na ban apna to ban

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

Yes . you have a point.. It should have been 'uska' rather than 'Mera'

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Re: Paani paani kar gayee

koi is ko explain kr de ga