kuch pevand lagay khwab
chand udhaar ki sansain
ansu-on ka gadla sa joharr
muthi bhar adh khuli khwahishain
hain sab muhabbat ki soghatain
lekin aik dil jo aj bhi
taro taza or dharrak raha hai
k jis pe kisi k yad ne dera dala hai
aik aisi yad jo baal khole
matam kar rhi hai
or jis pe badalte mosmon ne bhi
apni ra-nai ki kaai nhi jamne di
lekin jab kabhi wo rota hai
phaphak phaphak ker
tu wo khasta khwab,ansu or khwahishain
apne adhure wajood k sath
uss ka hissa ban jati hain…
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first time blank verse likhi hai...ya allah pasand a jaye :s
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Expressed Nicely 
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Mabadoulat ko pasand aai aap key yah kavish 
Shabash keep it up
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Its My Inspiration she has expressed here !!
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shabash k haqdaar tu ap hain ustad-e-mohtaram k ap ki recheckin ki wajah se ye post kerne k qabil hui 
kher ab mera b shukriah karen k ap ko ustaad ban-ne ka moqa dia 
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thanx 
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absolutely right :no:
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**apni ra-nai ki kaai nhi jamne di
lekin jab kabhi wo rota hai.....
very nice ....liked it
:)
sat**
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beautiful one Shazoo aapa :k:
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Nice. :k:
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bus kabhi gharoor naheen kia Apun talented logoon key qadar karta hay iss liye kabhi kabhaar mashwara day daita hoon :cobra:
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Nice :k:
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thanx every one :)
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Meine to aj perhi yeh 
Brilliant
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yehi jumla bol k teacher se pit-te ho jab test samnay ata hai 
thanx
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Ek dfa pita tha 
Ur Welcome
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very nice 
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thanx
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Bohat achi nazm hey :k: