Open Letter

No, you did what you wanted to or was led to
So sorry that you did that what you senselessly did
Care was accorded to you but,
You deprived yourself of that altogether

Know that just how you acted,
You must have been ingrate
For many things in your life
Like choice, honesty, responsibility & honor

Strength could have been by your side,
But, you hid and hid and are hiding
Still, care is certain & right here
Dignified even as it was insulted

For an absence of your reciprocity in kind,
Distancing escape of yours from yourself
Perhaps, jumbled in words not meant, & your hurried actions
Which failed themselves garlanded by all,
Hypocrisy or that besetting confusion
*That *took you over
For never to completely understand
As you lost all care

Hope says… that you have learnt
to not do this to anyone else,
Hope says… that you do
& Hope says… that after that discovery,
May you be fine.

Dushwari<O:p</O:p

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w0w.. i always wished that i cld rite a masterpiece like this in english.. but kia karoon k sochain he saari urdu main aati hain :(

very nice poem..

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Jinati zuban hummm pehlay bhi to koi badaysi bhash hi thee

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what did you say Azad?
can you please praphrase it in easy english?

best,

Dushwari

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aap ki post ka tarjumma mil jay to hum bhi parrh'ne ki sadat hasil kar lein.

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Azad, you are beyond my comprehension.
best,

Dushwari

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Karam hay molla ka

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LOL… Azad bhai… Vs Dushwari :omg:

funny convo.. that’s called jaisaY ko tesaa :stuck_out_tongue:

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Aap per ya meirey per??

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AQ,

you look very nice when you smile. keep smiling.

best,

Dushwari

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Molla apnay b'hyd khoob janta hay

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hummm ha'mil e mosomiyat e mossa hay, miss'le e fer'on koi go'd hi na lay le

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what a brat!