oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

[Pramod]

Soncha aaj eik aur apnii ghazal aap logon se share karoonN..kuchh maheene pahle likhiii thii..hamesha kii tarah aap ke suggestions and intezaar rahega…

oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii
koi kar rahaa tha ooska intezaar bhii

khizaaN badnaam hai, ye aur baat hai
warna looTe hai gulsitaaN bahaar bhii

eik dil tha , wo bhii oosne le liyaa
ab zid hai ke chaahiye qaraar bhii

wo aae ga to kis tarah se aae ga
hai raaste meiN rasmoN kii diwaar bhii

faislaa ab kya hoga mere qatl kaa
wo hi qaatil hai jo kal tha mera yaar bhii

main ehsaanmaNd hooN bahot es chaand ka
hai raushani meiN mera ye mazaar bhii

[nikii]

Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii…

*Originally posted by Pramod: *

oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii
koi kar rahaa tha ooska intezaar bhii

khizaaN badnaam hai, ye aur baat hai
warna looTe hai gulsitaaN bahaar bhii

eik dil tha , wo bhii oosne le liyaa
ab zid hai ke chaahiye qaraar bhii

wo aae ga to kis tarah se aae ga
hai raaste meiN rasmoN kii diwaar bhii

faislaa ab kya hoga mere qatl kaa
wo hi qaatil hai jo kal tha mera yaar bhii

main ehsaanmaNd hooN bahot es chaand ka
hai raushani meiN mera ye mazaar bhii

bhut hi zaberdast parmod ji :k:
keep it up
rhxs 4 sharing:)

[arifnawaz1]

:k: Keep it up !

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

:k: :k: bohat khoob

[Pramod]

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya, nikki, arif bhai aur HeArT HaCKeR.

[Capricorn]

Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii…

*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Soncha aaj eik aur apnii ghazal aap logon se share karoonN..kuchh maheene pahle likhiii thii..hamesha kii tarah aap ke suggestions and intezaar rahega…

oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii
koi kar rahaa tha ooska intezaar bhii

khizaaN badnaam hai, ye aur baat hai
warna looTe hai gulsitaaN bahaar bhii

eik dil tha , wo bhii oosne le liyaa
ab zid hai ke chaahiye qaraar bhii

wo aae ga to kis tarah se aae ga
hai raaste meiN rasmoN kii diwaar bhii

faislaa ab kya hoga mere qatl kaa
wo hi qaatil hai jo kal tha mera yaar bhii

main ehsaanmaNd hooN bahot es chaand ka
hai raushani meiN mera ye mazaar bhii

Pramod :k:
Impressing and beautiful. Aap buhat acha likhte hain aur likhte raha karein naheen to mere jaisay ho jaeinge.

Teree aankhon ke siwa aye dost
Mujhe yaad aata hai tera piyar bhee

Mein kabhee tera sirf tera shair tha
yaad karo hai mujhe yeh aizaaz bhee:)

(Just wrote while getting inspiration from ur rhyme)

[Lamhay]

wonderful pramod ji thanks 4 sharing

[Pramod]

Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii…

*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Pramod :k:
Impressing and beautiful. Aap buhat acha likhte hain aur likhte raha karein naheen to mere jaisay ho jaeinge.

Teree aankhon ke siwa aye dost
Mujhe yaad aata hai tera piyar bhee

Mein kabhee tera sirf tera shair tha
yaad karo hai mujhe yeh aizaaz bhee:)

(Just wrote while getting inspiration from ur rhyme)

Capricron jii,

aap ki zaraa navaazii hai warna hum kahaan aur ghazal kahaaN..yun hi kosish kar late hain kabhee kabhee…log kabhee kabhee gham de jaate hain main oonhein lafzon mein dhaal kar apne pass rakh leta hoon..aap logon ka honsla afzaai milta hai to gham zara kam ho jaata hai..
waise aap ne bhii achha likha hai..
thanks once again for appriciating my ghazal

[chand_chehra]

Niceeee :k:

thanko for sharing

[Capricorn]

Re: Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Capricron jii,

aap ki zaraa navaazii hai warna hum kahaan aur ghazal kahaaN..yun hi kosish kar late hain kabhee kabhee...log kabhee kabhee gham de jaate hain main oonhein lafzon mein dhaal kar apne pass rakh leta hoon..aap logon ka honsla afzaai milta hai to gham zara kam ho jaata hai..
waise aap ne bhii achha likha hai..
thanks once again for appriciating my ghazal
[/QUOTE]

Yahee to...gham milte aur aap aur hum jaise bewaqoof jama karte in ko!

[Pramod]

ghazal pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Lamhey and Chaand jii...

[Pramod]

Re: Re: Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Yahee to...gham milte aur aap aur hum jaise bewaqoof jama karte in ko!
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ajii ye gham hi to hai..koi BOMB to nahin...gham mein bhii rahne ka aik azeeb hi lutf hain...

[chand_chehra]

Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii…

*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Pramod :k:
Impressing and beautiful. Aap buhat acha likhte hain aur likhte raha karein naheen to mere jaisay ho jaeinge.

Teree aankhon ke siwa aye dost
Mujhe yaad aata hai tera piyar bhee

Mein kabhee tera sirf tera shair tha
yaad karo hai mujhe yeh aizaaz bhee:)

(Just wrote while getting inspiration from ur rhyme)

hummm
nice capri :K:

wasay kis kay shair thay ap

[Capricorn]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

ajii ye gham hi to hai..koi BOMB to nahin...gham mein bhii rahne ka aik azeeb hi lutf hain...
[/QUOTE]

Aap rahen bhira jee....hum to nikal aaye:)
Allah kabhee kisee ko gham na dikhae, aap ko bhee naheen..aur agar maza hee chakhana hai Allah mian ko to thora sa chakhae, buhat hee thora sa...Aameen.

[Capricorn]

Re: Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

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[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii…

*Originally posted by Pramod: *
oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii
koi kar rahaa tha ooska intezaar bhii

khizaaN badnaam hai, ye aur baat hai
warna looTe hai gulsitaaN bahaar bhii

eik dil tha , wo bhii oosne le liyaa
ab zid hai ke chaahiye qaraar bhii

wo aae ga to kis tarah se aae ga
hai raaste meiN rasmoN kii diwaar bhii

faislaa ab kya hoga mere qatl kaa
wo hi qaatil hai jo kal tha mera yaar bhii

main ehsaanmaNd hooN bahot es chaand ka
hai raushani meiN mera ye mazaar bhii

:k::k::k:
udass mat ho.keep smiling:)

[Jaan_Lewaa]

bhut khoob:k:

[Khushee]

very nice.... keep it up :)

[Pramod]

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ghazal kisi ke,Jaan Lewa and Khushi jii.

[Pramod]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: oosne muR ke hi na dekha eik baar bhii...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Aap rahen bhira jee....hum to nikal aaye:)
Allah kabhee kisee ko gham na dikhae, aap ko bhee naheen..aur agar maza hee chakhana hai Allah mian ko to thora sa chakhae, buhat hee thora sa...Aameen.
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Capricorn jii, hum to bas etna jaante hain..

cheeze es gham se baDi
es zamaane mein nahiN
jo maza rone meiN hai
muskuraane meiN nahiN
kitne naadaaN haiN wo
gham se anjaan haiN jo
gham na hota agar
kya khushi kii thi kadar
gham to hai masiha dostoN
gham se bhii dava ka dostoN
kaam liya jaata hai

Aaa bata deiN tujhe hum
kaise jiya jaata hai....