Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Pramod · February 25, 2003, 6:33am

chhoTe bahar kii ye ghazal aaj hii puri kii hai maine…soncha aap logon se share karooN…

ye zindagii kii bisaat kya hai
jeet kya hai aur maat kya hai

Dil meiN sharaarat,aankh meiN aaNsoo
Tum hi kaho ye , jazbaat kya hai

wafaa ne hii tujhe bewafaa banaaya
Warna terii, auqaat kya hai

nafratoN meiN bhii rahta hai meri
Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Meri peeth aur tera khanzar
Dosti meiN ye saugaat kya hai

mere liye Jab uThaaya hai patthar
To phir ye jhijhak , ye ihtiyaat kya ha

Bhooli_Bisri · February 25, 2003, 6:38am

pramod ji bahut umdah kavish hai apki.

Dragon_King · February 25, 2003, 6:58am

buhat khoob :k:

nikii · February 25, 2003, 2:21pm

bhut khoob parmod ji :k:

Amal · February 25, 2003, 3:05pm

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Bohat khoob Pramod:k:…keep it up:)

system · February 25, 2003, 5:47pm

bohat khoob, :k::k:

Pramod · February 25, 2003, 6:44pm

honsla afzaai ke liye aap saboN ka bahot bahot shukriya
Bhooli Bisari,D King,nikki, Amal and *** Vivacious ***

chand_chehra · February 25, 2003, 6:45pm

Nice pramod gi :k:

_Nazish · February 25, 2003, 6:46pm

bohat khoob :-)

mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap bhee likhte hain aur acha khasa likhte hain.

Capricorn · February 25, 2003, 6:51pm

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Now this contains poetic philosophy. I appreciate ur work Pramod :k:

Koyal · February 25, 2003, 10:52pm

nice one Pram je....thanks 4 sharing per ap ko tu poetry main sirf Nikami,chand,aur amal he nazar atey aur kbhi kisi ki post dekhi taak nahi :(

Pramod · February 26, 2003, 5:23am

Shukriya Chaand jii.....

Pramod · February 26, 2003, 5:30am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
bohat khoob :-)

mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap bhee likhte hain aur acha khasa likhte hain.
[/QUOTE]

haaN zara tukbandiii kar lete haiN...
waise GS pe hamesha maine apnii he creations post kii hai...aap logon kii honsla azaai se thoda confidence mil jaata hai.....

bahot bahot shukriya aap ka Nazish jii....

Pramod · February 26, 2003, 5:33am

Re: Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Thanks for your appriciation, Capricorn. These words will go a long way with me.

Pramod · February 26, 2003, 5:42am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *
nice one Pram je....thanks 4 sharing per ap ko tu poetry main sirf Nikami,chand,aur amal he nazar atey aur kbhi kisi ki post dekhi taak nahi :(
[/QUOTE]

sab se pahle to ghazal pasand karne aur daad dene ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Koyal jii....
ab rahii aap ki shikaayat kii baat to kuchh had tak aap theek kahti haiN..meri problem ye hai ke mujhe sirf ghazaleiN samajh mein aati haiN aur mostly I like to appriciate the shaayar. es forum par maximum log kisi aur shaayar kii creations post karte haiN..jo yaa to maine padhii hoti hai ya phir I appriciate the shaayar....Amal sahab bahot achha likhte hain..oonkii creations se mujhe khud kuchh seekhne ko milta hai...

Nikami Bahna aur Chand jii mostly ghazals post karti hain aur oon kii choice....REALLY GREAT...aur ye na naaje kahaaN se ghazaleiN dhoodh ke laati haiN..most of the times maine nahin padhee hoti hai..

These are the reasons..but ab main koshish karoonga ke aap ko ye shikaayat kam rahe mujh se.....

Dilsay · February 26, 2003, 5:42am

Well said.....

Sehar · February 26, 2003, 6:03am

Good one Pramod :-)

Philanthrope · February 26, 2003, 7:40am

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Wah…bohat umda koshish hai aapki…
Keep it up! :k:

tunhaye · February 26, 2003, 7:52am

buhat khub

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 26, 2003, 2:27pm

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
mere liye Jab uThaaya hai patthar

To phir ye jhijhak , ye ihtiyaat kya ha
[/QUOTE]

Very Nice, Keep it up:-)