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wens the next posting of the story?
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this is pretty interesting! when r u posting the next part??
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next part is coming tonight... too much work to type with two fingers only, you know :)
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Dude come on take some typing classes. <>](http://www.davis.k12.ut.us/cjh/appliedtech/Business/Keyboarding/Index.html)
Ok now use all 10 of them and post the remaining parts 
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Nah Man :)
It's way too hard yaar especially at this age. You will be surprised that I can actually type 30-40 words a minute just using two fingers. I dropped my typing class when realized I would had not been able to make it. It's much easier to learn at younger age.
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what is the title of this thread?
“star plus on GUPSHUP” 
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lolz
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....continued from the previous posts #1, 8, 17, 46 & 68
After a long pause, Ali said, “You know Irrum, I have never stopped loving you and I will never stop it either.” That made Irrum crying louder. Irrum started telling Ali how much she loved him and right after she first met him how she started to break up with Wasif but that guy kept following her. Based on what Ali had known until then, it did sort of make sense. He told her not to talk about the past anymore and looked towards the brighter side to come as they were back together. He made her feel as if he was really happy and she actually was happier. During past four months, Ali had been trying hard to convince his parents to approve Irrum for him. They were not agreeing to him at all. Ali’s mother had liked some other girl in Pakistan and wanted him to marry with her. Ali, on the other hand, had no interest in that girl. He did not know her at all. After knowing about Irrum’s ongoing relationship with Wasif, Ali had certainly changed his mind about marrying her at all. He had even told his parents that Irrum was out of his life and that had really made them happy.
Ali and Irrum were back to normal and started spending hours on the phone. One night Ali called her at 9:00 PM and then kept talking to her till 5:02 AM, for eight hours and two minutes altogether in one straight call. Ali had lost his total trust in her. He was just trying to win her love back to the full intensity and then dump her. He had also planned to be in a physical relationship with her this time, as he had no plans of marrying her anymore. Ali had also sensed that Irrum was going out with other guys in Phoenix those days. He could feel the change in the tone of her conversation sometimes when he would call her. She would not say a word in English but all in Urdu, something that was not normal. Ali could assume that there would have been some non-desi guy right next to her at those times and she would have made it sound like she was talking to her mother in her native language. This should have not mattered to Ali at all; he somehow would have felt miserable during those times. His heart would start aching when he could not see or know what was actually happening on the other side.
Ali planned a trip to go to Phoenix to meet her just two weeks after they got back together. He went to Phoenix and was picked up by Irrum at the airport. They went straight to the motel and Ali took care of the business intended. She was actually doing some big drama as if she was a saint, something Ali did not like. He wanted to tell her to shut up and be real but did not want to ruin his trip. After Ali met her in an intimate way, he was so surprised to find out some unexpected things about her and reached to the conclusion that she was sexually active. He wasn’t a saint himself but she took him with surprise. Stupid girl even had some love bites on her neck fresh from a day or so ago. When he asked her about those, she unconvincingly replied that those were rashes she had recently gotten from some soap she used. Ali was quiet and kept it all inside. He wasn’t sure whether he was happy and satisfied with his trip. After he went back to New York, he started showing his cold shoulder to Irrum. Irrum persistently kept calling him and took Ali into her talks. He was not treating her more than just a part-time lover without any love involved. He would however feel hurt on occasions when he had sensed something wrong from the other end. To get to the bottom of the matter, he planned another tactic. He brought a common friend involved in the picture, someone who Irrum could trust and share her day-to-day activities with. This guy Zaki was Ali’s old friend and he had taken Irrum into confidence and started talking to her openly about his personal life. Irrum in response started sharing her matters with him. Zaki would then report all that information back to Ali. Zaki confirmed to Ali that Irrum was seeing other guys at her school.
Ali though hurt inside, kept his cool and did not show any reaction to Irrum. Few months passed this way. Ali called Irrum during odd hours and kept her on the run. Whatever she was doing, it must have been very hard on her, or she was playing equally smart. This was summer of 1993 and she was off from school so was working at a local Albertson. One day she told Ali that there was a birthday party coming for one of her girlfriend from work and she would be gone out with the group. Ali as usual smelled something fishy and kept asking her questions. She changed her story few times and then finally ended up with the one that they were all going to go flying to celebrate her friend’s birthday in the air. Ali asked what time they would be coming back from flying? She said it might be until midnight or even later. Ali spontaneously said, “What small plane you guys are going to fly at night?” He knew that most of these small planes fly based on visibility and there was no way to fly in the dark. She paused for a minute then cleverly replied, “Well, in Phoenix during summer it is extremely hot during the daytime so you can only fly at night time.” Ali called his spy friend Zaki and asked him to find out more about it. Sure enough, Irrum was going to go out on a date with some white guy from work on his birthday. And there wasn’t any flying involved altogether. The day came when she had to actually go. Ali strangely was feeling very hurt that day with his heart all-aching. He called her and pleaded her not to go anywhere. He did not tell her that he had found out about where she was actually going. He however asked her to stay home, just to talk to him on the phone. As time was clicking, she started being restless and was trying to get off the phone. She told him that she could not cancel this plan and had to go anyway. Ali got really hurt that night. Either Ali was falling for her again or he was just being over possessive of something he did not own. He did not want her to go out with anybody else.
Irrum told Zaki about a couple of her rather steady affairs. It appeared that she could not do without her physical desires being fulfilled. Another conclusion that Ali made was that she was going after the variety, as she did not seem to be happy with just one man. In the meantime, being hurt and curious Ali wanted to find out more about her. He made some online buddies from her college at Florida and asked them about her. Luckily for Ali, they knew her and all told him that she was a playgirl. She was often seen with some different guy at college. Ali could not believe how a little girl who looked so innocent could be such a devil and do all those things. He was now certain that she was out of control so it was better to let go of her. He did not call her neither accepted any call from her for a week. She persistently kept calling and eventually left him a message that she was coming to New York the following week. Ali then called her back and asked her not to come. She said she could not afford to loose him and was dying to see him. Sure enough, she did come to New York and spent 3 nights with Ali pleasing him in every possible way out there. Ali once again became a bit softer and let the relationship go on for convenience. Now this was towards the end of 1993, Ali planned another trip to Phoenix. She was seemingly happy to see him. This time she was a bit cautious not to carry any hicky marks and showed no other signs about anything skeptical.
During winter break, she went to see her family for a week. Ali took that as an opportunity to break some news to her while she was still at Florida. Though she had been feeling the coldness in Ali for the past many months, but she was still hoping to marry him. Ali had never talked to her about marriage since he had found out about her ongoing relationship with Wasif. He just told her that he was unable to convince his parents to accept his decision of marrying her. That was the actual case anyway. They would have not approved of her even if he had tried to convince them. He told her that he was planning to go to Pakistan in April and there was a good chance that he would be either married or engaged during his trip. In the meantime he had given his family a green signal of his consent to go along with their decision towards his marriage. Even though he wasn’t sure whether he could live with someone who he had not seen or known at all, but the option of an arranged marriage definitely seemed way better than marrying Irrum. Ali had planned to go to Pakistan in April and then to go perform Hajj along with his family. When he was about to leave, Irrum certainly was sad and very uncertain on things. That must had been very hard on her but there wasn’t much she could do about it. She however was still hoping that Ali would come back unmarried so that she could take him forever in her life. She even had prayed begging God to help her. Prayers, she did do once in a while, especially in Ramadan and occasionally recited Quran as well.
Ali reached Pakistan in the beginning of April. After a quick visit by the prospect bride’s family, things were settled. Ali hadn’t seen the girl as yet and was hoping for the best. They left for Hajj on April 20, 1994. Ali accompanied his mother and sister and his father was supposed to join them a couple of weeks later after he had gotten his special Hajj visa. The girl’s father was supposed to be coming from Saudi Arabia towards the end of May and Ali and his family were supposed to be coming back from Hajj on June 2, 1994. The date for the Nikah was set for June 04. Ali’s father somehow could not get his Hajj visa so could not go to Saudi Arabia and Lubna’s dad came back from Saudi Arabia earlier than his actual plan. He talked to Ali’s dad and told him how he had to go back to Saudi Arabia on June 3 so it was not possible to do the function as planned. He asked Ali’s dad if it was ok to postpone it for few months. Ali’s dad did not see any problem in doing so hence the program of Nikah was postponed. When Ali with his mother and sister, came back, they found out about the change in the plan and got quite upset. Ali didn’t feel anything and just kept quiet. A couple of days later, Ali received a call from Lubna, the prospective bridal, who asked him to meet her outside her college the next day. Being a bit uneasy, he agreed. He went to her college at the agreed time and had a brief talk with her. She requested him to somehow cancel the plan of marrying her without giving him any reason. He was stunned but agreed to do so. While Ali was at Hajj, Irrum called her home and talked to his dad who was quite rude with her and told her to forget about Ali. He exaggerated the facts to tell her that they had planned Ali’s marriage. Irrum did cry all night after finding that out. She persistently called Ali’s roommate in New York to get updates about Ali during his entire stay in Pakistan. Ali sent a card to Irrum from Saudi Arabia and also called her on the phone that had definitely gave her unexpected joy and satisfaction.
[RIGHT].....to be continued[/RIGHT]
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I believe You to be Ali .. and you guys finally got married at the end .. cos how wud some one know so much info .. to the last minuit and second .. 8hrs and 2 mins . ..and how Irrum was crying etc whilst ali wasnt there ...
but do carry on ...................:biggthumb
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I believe You to be Ali .. and you guys finally got married at the end .. cos how wud some one know so much info .. to the last minuit and second .. 8hrs and 2 mins . ..and how Irrum was crying etc whilst ali wasnt there ...
but do carry on ...................:biggthumb
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haha.... lol fabi :D
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wens the ending coming??
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Can we call that guy a butt-hole? PUHHHHHHHLEEEEEAAASE. I dont see how hes any better than irrum and especially this line "He wasn’t a saint himself but she took him with surprise."
So its okay for that SOB to be sexually active but if its a girl it takes you by surprise?
Another reason i think hes a butt-hole is if she was playin him then why did he stoop down to her level actually lower ??
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This story is like an annoying indian soap, you absolutely hate watching it but you do it just to find out what happens next 
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Irrum was bad enough with what she was doing- multiple relationship, sexually active. Why is Ali continuing to have a physical relationship with her. That is just as bad. There is no pint of gettin revenge from her, if he is stooping to the same level.
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^maybe thats why he went to hajj...to ask forgiveness for his sins :Dlol
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^^Maybe?
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^^ and i m pretty sure he'll come back to america and will do the same thing again.
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Can we call that guy a butt-hole? PUHHHHHHHLEEEEEAAASE. I dont see how hes any better than irrum and especially this line "He wasn’t a saint himself but she took him with surprise." So its okay for that SOB to be sexually active but if its a girl it takes you by surprise? Another reason i think hes a butt-hole is if she was playin him then why did he stoop down to her level actually lower ??
Are you Irrum by any chance? Your reaction has made me really wodering!
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^i think u r Ali :D