on someone's insistence...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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here I go… a scrap from my journal:

Khwaab
KHAMOSH AFSANEY – June 2000

Dastoor hai apni raatoN ka key neendh hummey kamm aati hai
Maamoor bana hai khwaaboN ka key roaz sataaney aatey heiN

Waisey tow bayabaaN hai duniya - kuuch bhi tow nahi jeeney key liye
Lekin khwaaboN kaa kyaa kehiye, inhey khuub fasaaney aatey heiN

Naa aaj aayeN naa kall shaayad - parr guzrey lamhey acchey thei
Phir khwaab mey humko yaad aksar, buss guzrey zamaaney aatey heiN

Jo mil naa sakey woh kyuuN dekheyN - jo ho naa sakey woh kyuuN socheyN
Lekin phir aaj armaaN lekarr, hummey jeeney key bahaaney aatey heiN

Suhaani ghariyaaN raatoN mey - band aankhoN sey duniya daikh hee lee
Jubb aankh khuuley tow socha kiye, hummey din kyuuN jagaaney aatey heiN

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Very hee good :)

I am sure there are other scraps that you can also share. Please do keep posting.

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Buhat Khoobsurat :~)
Thanks for sharing!!

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Nice:)
Yeh bhee likhna tha na kis ke kehne par post kia hai? ;)

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nice

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nice :k:

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ankheeN mal mal key dekhney wala icon

accha to yeh aap hi haiN… welkom back janab :slight_smile: ~:flower2:~

jisn ney bhi aap ko wapis aaney pe majboor kiya, buhat achha kiya..eik thapki us key liye :slight_smile:

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excellent choice....
sehar is right, sahre some more scraps

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ah. that made me sad.. and so early in the morning

:crying:

nicely written.

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awww 98 group!

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Thank you all for liking it - I'm flattered by the kind words.

Sehar & Saby,
:) only if I could make out the significance of something I write in my journal a couple of days after I write it :--) I wouldn't mind sharing it.

Capricon,
;) I'm sure the person who asked me to has read it by now - unlike moi, that person's a regular around here.

hayaa,
don't be sad - pleeeeeeaze... chalo yeh lo lolly-pop || and I'll get you that cup o yogurt too - chalo abb hanss do.

Thank You all again :)

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**un khawabo ko kio dekhna, jo har lamhey dil cheer kar yaad aey?
un haseen ratoo mein jaghana kahey ka, jab woh zindagi ko sawal chor jaey?

zindagi upar waley ki deen hai, kio na Us Khuda sey muhabat karein?
aur pursakoon ratoon ki, umeedein aur duaein karein?

jo apna tha hi nahee, us pe kahey ka rona talib?
kio na naii umeedo, aur sapno ko sajaya jaey ?

**

very good umar... hope to see more :~)

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:) thanks nia
will share more in time.

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zaberdast bhut hi khoobbb :k:
really thxs for sharing :slight_smile:

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very nice
thanks for sharing :)