old love

Meri Jaan i still feel
The pinch on my heel
You can make me bleed
you can make me cry
But you can’t take out
The happiness you put in me
Though you are gone and
I live in a world of gost
I sip every second
Of this life as a wine
The more I drink
The more I am drunk
Awaken by your fun
But blinded by the sun
The more I think of you
The least I am missing you

Re: old love

this peom has the word wine in it...wine is clearly haraam

this poem must be banned

Re: old love

:stuck_out_tongue: this is a metaphor!! main sharabi nahin piti hoon:blush:

Re: old love

Is this poem for me? :blush:

Re: old love

black mamba...nothing is for you.... go back to cafe

Re: old love

:slight_smile: he was kindly invited to read that poem…and appreciated so he can stay in poetry section…unlike you who want to ban me from there:snooty:

Re: old love

The more I think of you
The least I am missing you

Technicaly ^ is Wrong :D
Dont tell me to Read it int he context of the Poem :p

Re: old love

thats what u think hon. but in reallity I always get the best. :blush: for instance the friendship of Noor.

:kiss: