Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

My first time sharing my singing on GS. Not perfect singing but oh well :smiley: Aaj jaane ki zid na karo is one of my fav ghazals :smiley: Hope it is tolerable (i screwed up in the middle!)

https://soundcloud.com/rosedreams/aaj-jaane-ki-zid-na-karo

Re: Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

buhut khoob :k:…murkiyan waghera pori le hain

aj KHANAY ki zid na karo :k:

Re: Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

tiger ko qaafi bhook lag rahi hai lagta hai

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very good attempt RD... I am glad with the new additions :@:
upload more please :)

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wow RD, i didn’t know that you were a hidden gem…masha Allah…you have a good voice…you need to get just a little bit of practice with sur N taal…you have done a great job…congratulations.

don’t forget to post some more, please. thank you for sharing. :biggthumb:

Re: Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

Wah wah!

Acchi Koshish Ki hai Aap ne. :)

Re: Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

Good job!

Oh wow thanks for the appreciation. I'll try posting more in a few days then!

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Iss thread par aik shair hai.....

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Mashallah....keep them coming....

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Nice :k:

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Nice voice. Well done.

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itni dair ho gai, ap ka shair nhe aya konfused

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Good attempt.

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and now princejall will post his attempt :whistling:

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check out Pahli nazar

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Awesome work rosedreams. It was superb :)

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You sang Pehli nazar :)? WHere :k:

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Yeah Where? :faizy:

Re: Ok my first try.. Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo

in this gallery, the first post is my Audio Pahli nazar,