O Mere Dil Day Chain

Samad · September 20, 2007, 9:56pm

Meri keetab jiska naam “Kachay Pakoray” is being released soon all over the world by Bloomsbury publications. I am waiting for their reply.

I want some help from all the guppies. I want to change the name of my book to something attractive.

So agar koi acha sa naam hai to please pata daiN.

Meri keetab ki pehli ghazal ka naam hai “Jab raat ko kutta bhonka, to mera dil achanak chonka” , and jo doosri ghazal hai wo kuch yooN hai

O Mere Dil day Chain
Tere Pichay Kuttay Pain
Tu Lutya Mere dil da Chain
Rab Karray Tainnu Keeray Pain
Tere Nain baray Nasheelay!
JiwaiN jhaRoo day teelaY
Tu Mere dil wich edaN wassay
jiwaiN chikkaR wich Majj phassi
jaan e jigar , jaan e tamanna
EDHAR A TERIAN LATTA PANNAN

Let me know if you have some suggetions.

Thanks

Jhalli · September 20, 2007, 9:59pm

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oye-hoye... dil khush kar ditta paa-ji! :D

(luv the maj pHaNsing in the chikkur part!)

Rosemarina · September 20, 2007, 10:00pm

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haha

sheyn · September 20, 2007, 10:03pm

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there u go ASN.......do larkiyaan hogaai....ab lock kerdiya jaai....;wink:

TLK · September 20, 2007, 10:04pm

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ASN, how about JHALLI MAJJ, since jhalli likes that so much, so it will be a kind of dedication to her

Parvati_didi · September 20, 2007, 10:05pm

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ek Parvati didi ke liye bhi ghazal likho:vivo:

phir suggestion doon gi

Samad · September 20, 2007, 10:05pm

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I love your name, its so stylish. (f)

Samad · September 20, 2007, 10:07pm

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**pakha chalda , hawa denda

pakha chalda, hawa dena

na chalda, tay na denda!
**

Jhalli · September 20, 2007, 10:07pm

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awww, thas so shweet... you're tryin' to make me feel at home, aren'tcha? wink-wink

but, i ain't yo typical guppan.. :P

Dhoti_Main_Dhamaka · September 20, 2007, 10:07pm

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main tau kitab ka naam parh kay hee pharak gaya....
kabb chapni hai app ki sawanh umree?

Samad · September 20, 2007, 10:08pm

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I want it to be released by Bloomsbury, the same karkhana who released Harry Puttar.

Dhoti_Main_Dhamaka · September 20, 2007, 10:09pm

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okay
zamanat kitni maang rahay hain woh?

TLK · September 20, 2007, 10:10pm

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Inkee sawanah-e--umaree ka naam kachchay pakoray nahiN, kachchay gulgulay hai

Kachchay Pakoray to majmooa'e kalaam ka naam hai

Samad · September 20, 2007, 10:10pm

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They have not replied to my e-mail yet. So no idea.

Rosemarina · September 20, 2007, 10:17pm

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ASN, thanks. :)

Parvati_didi · September 20, 2007, 10:19pm

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is main mera naam kahan aaya:vivo:

aaisay karein , book ka naam Parvati didi hi rakhein

khoob biKKe gi:sweetif:

Samad · September 20, 2007, 10:20pm

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Jab bi aap ka nick parta hoon, dil ko kuch kuch hota hai, mera dil kehta hai is nick kay pecehay aik bohat haseen pari bethi hai. Keh do ye sach hai

tay parvati didi, SAAS BI KABHI BAHU mai lokaaN nu laraaN aliye, baaz aja.

Parvati_didi · September 20, 2007, 10:22pm

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zor say bolo:

sab ki didi

Parvati didi

eid aae gi

to sab ko mile gi eidi:vivo:

TLK · September 20, 2007, 10:35pm

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you are moving way too slow ,janaab. Kuch to pakistani larkoN kee laaj rakh lo yaraa

Samad · September 20, 2007, 11:34pm

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tairq, kaha slow? itna kuch to keh dia, baaqi mokay ki munasbat kay saath.