Nuqsaan…
Shokh-o-Chanchal Pagal Ankhain
Dil Ki Jhoomtee Gatee Dharkan
Sab ka Sab Veraan Hoa Hai
Teray Baad Ayy Meray Humdum
Dekh Zara Tou…
Kitna Bara Nuqsaan Hoa Hai!!
mujha zaror batiay ga..app ko kaisee lagee maree nazam:)
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nice wording, smooth flow of words brilliant keep it up :k:
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Hay Allah…itni tareef…
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Yahan end kyun kardi or likoo agay !
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jee???
mujhay tu jitnee aatee thee…wahan ye "full stop"laga diya…
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Beautiful poem :k:
keep it up n keep sharing
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thanks…
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sonia.. shd I say anything for this tehreer??? i cant.. pata kia.. abb to its becoming obvious for me.. k sonia ne ki hai to BUHAT ACHI he hogi.. its really very awesome.. very sweet n so simple.. 
shabash
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AWWWWW…
thanks Ahmer:)
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Exactly my thoughts
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thanks for the complements AQ bhai:)…
its for u:bb:
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soniaa_jee bohat zabardast poem… so simple yet so impressive. Aek achey likhaari ki ye bhi shanaakht hoti hey ke wo thorrey sey lafzoN meiN bohat saari baateiN keh deta hey. Great job 
k:
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Nuqsaan..................
Shokh-o-Chanchal Pagal Ankhain
Dil Ki Jhoomtee Gatee Dharkan
Sab ka Sab Veraan Hoa Hai
Teray Baad Ayy Meray Humdum
Dekh Zara Tou....
Kitna Bara Nuqsaan Hoa Hai!!
mujha zaror batiay ga..app ko kaisee lagee maree nazam:)
kuch alfaaz mein buhat kuch bayan kar diya hey, thats great, keep sharing :-)
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thanks Amal…
app jaisy gr8 poet k comments r really an honour for me…
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beautiful thought, and yet expressed with such a brevity. keep 'em coming :k:
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Sada O Simple Alfaaz Se BunI yEh Nazam Dil K Tammam Jazbaat Keh rahi HaI bohat umda Nazam HaI Sonia Jee
Dil Khush Ho Gaya ~
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app ka dil khush ho gaya tu mahnaat wasool ho gayee Sid Brother:hugz:
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lafzoon ka chunaoo bohot sadda or zaberdast hai. good work :k:
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So Nice Of You Sjay
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beautifully creative 