Now this is not poetry!

I have a desire to live no more!
Would some angel of death descend
and snatch away my soul
from this aging clay of misery
that has it’s talons into my heart
and is tearing it apart.
I have a desire to live no more.

Re: Now this is not poetry!

Very Nice… Whimsical :flower1:

BUT… The HOPE is Dead in it… thats not good :slight_smile:

Re: Now this is not poetry!

life is so nice, sun is over us…
may the light of a fairy touch you soon
whimsical may you live long and happy to deliver your poetry