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hiccup · January 1, 2004, 3:58pm

Suns arise, drinking twilight
in gulps. Greedy.
Steady as strikes on man made clocks.
Tick…
You sicken me sun.
I vomit your personified happiness.
Vile. Stop.
Stop smiling.
Tock.

Tick…
Moon is a hiding.
Beautiful.
Away. From man.
A child is the man of tomorrow.
Tock.

Timeless
Spiders stuck in their own.
Webs and dark, evil lies.
I lay here breathing my last

I can no longer breath.
Ad the moon is a-shining.
I never want to see your sun again.
Stop.

Dilsay · January 1, 2004, 4:10pm

Nice

2GooD2BTruE · January 1, 2004, 5:26pm

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I likey

hiccup · January 5, 2004, 9:57pm

Im a special fan of the tick-tockings

Muslim_Queen · January 5, 2004, 10:20pm

It flowed so well until the —I vomit your personified happiness.

hiccup · January 15, 2004, 8:30pm

.

2GooD2BTruE · January 15, 2004, 9:41pm

^ :-|

Miss_Mohabbat · December 4, 2004, 5:04pm

guess what i did in my spare time......

i adore your style of writing love....its really deep

i read all of your stuff and this one is my fav

now i demand you write me some poems for my kids...i promise to give you all the credit!!

pretty pleaseeeeeeeee

Golden_Scorpion_1 · December 5, 2004, 6:31am

Although Mujhko ThoRi ThoRi hi samajh ati hay

Dynamic_fire · December 6, 2004, 2:20pm

nice:flower1:

show_sha · December 6, 2004, 8:33pm

nice !

hiccup · December 6, 2004, 10:50pm

thankyou poeple lakin its so bakwas! sharminda na karo please!

MM gimmie topics and Ill write em

paki_kurri_1 · December 15, 2004, 11:34pm

its not bakwas at all... i think its real nice

picard · December 16, 2004, 2:26am

its ok

hiccup · December 16, 2004, 11:14am

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its ok
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I am in no delusions, its ****

Abba_Jaan · December 17, 2004, 4:22am

I agree with you. do not feel ashamed

Happy?

hiccup · December 17, 2004, 9:11am

id be happier if people stopped responding, if you wanna gree go read something Ive written worth reading

Abba_Jaan · December 18, 2004, 4:43am

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id be happier if people stopped responding, if you wanna gree go read something Ive written worth reading :p
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worth reading? yes, I am reading the travelouge of Taqi Usmani these days :)

hiccup · December 18, 2004, 12:44pm

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worth reading? yes, I am reading the travelouge of Taqi Usmani these days :)
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I have finished White teeth by zadie smith, a very british book and infinitely funny. i recommend it. Along with Worm holers by Jamila Gavin, she writes for children but it is brilliant. Honest.

Abba_Jaan · December 19, 2004, 4:55pm

This travelogue gives me the window to the lives of my prophet :saw: and his companions and to the history of how Islam spread and why it declined…

Herat na kar badan ko meray choor dekh kar
unn rifatoN ko dekh jahaN se gira tha meiN

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