NigaahaiN tujh say ai dost milaauN kahaaN say
NahiN milti meri duniya teray jahaaN say
Tujhay khauf khud say tu jiyay mehfiloN maiN
Tanha lagay mujhay ab majmay sub yahaaN say
Ajnabi ban kay lagay milnay chehray aashna say
Chupkay say uthkay aa gaya maiN isliyay wahaaN say
Meri tarah meri duniya maiN aanaa "sagar’
Chaaho jo kabhi aanaa uth kay apnay jahaaN say
Re: NigaahaiN tujh say ai dost milaauN kahaaN say
NigaahaiN tujh say ai dost milaauN kahaaN say NahiN milti meri duniya teray jahaaN say
Tujhay khauf khud say tu jiyay mehfiloN maiN Tanha lagay mujhay ab majmay sub yahaaN say
Ajnabi ban kay lagay milnay chehray aashna say Chupkay say uthkay aa gaya maiN isliyay wahaaN say
Meri tarah meri duniya maiN aanaa "sagar' Chaaho jo kabhi aanaa uth kay apnay jahaaN say
Brijinder, I feel the appeal of your poem. Unfortunately the mehfils these days seem to have objectives other than promoting poetry, the main among them being the lip service of buddies even when they are wrong and write mediocre poetry. You will not meet me in this mehfil for long. So I hope to see you in some other mehfil.
PS: I hope this comment of mine survives the light of the day and you read it before it is deleted.