NEW STUFF...............

rabia_rana · August 5, 2006, 6:53am

NOOR KA DARYA US KI ZAAT
MAI US K SAHIL KI DAASI
(ISHQ E HAQIQI)

TUM ITNAY MUNFARID HERGIZ NAHI HO
MERI NAZRON KA HUSN HAI JANA’N

US KO YAD KRNA TU ROZ BHOOL JATI HON
US SAY PYAR KRNAY KI ARZOO NAHI JATI

BAHUT MUZTER HO AJKAL JANA’N
KIA KISI KI TARAF NAZAR KI THI??

mujh say milnay ka kia sabab ho ga??
phir koi kam per gaya hoga??

dono jahan ka ghum kio apnay dil mai rakh liya?
is dour mai milay ga koi chara ger kahan?

ITNI ACHI BATAIN KER KAY
MUJH KO TANHA KR JATAY HO
SEDHI RAH PAY CHALTAY CHALTAY
IK DAM RASTA MUR JATAY HO

by RABIA RANA(HAYA SHAH)

Impressionist · August 6, 2006, 11:50am

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written with great sincerity and conviction, beautiful!

Zamil · August 6, 2006, 6:17pm

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Bohat khoob kaha…
Kahan hain aaj kal khair se…?

goodnews · August 6, 2006, 6:36pm

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Rabia Buhat Umda.

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 6, 2006, 9:26pm

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*
dono jahan ka ghum kio apnay dil mai rakh liya?
is dour mai milay ga koi chara ger kahan?

ITNI ACHI BATAIN KER KAY
MUJH KO TANHA KR JATAY HO
SEDHI RAH PAY CHALTAY CHALTAY
IK DAM RASTA MUR JATAY HO*

Boht khoob.

Muslim_girl_1 · August 6, 2006, 9:43pm

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very very very very nice.........

Sannan · August 8, 2006, 7:42am

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Haya G : Tamam She'r buhat khubsurati say jabat key aakasi kartay hoiy .... i don't have the words to appreciate such a cool stuff ....................

mujh say milnay ka kia sabab ho ga??
phir koi kam per gaya hoga??

Iss she'r par mujhay ek she'r yaad aagia ... araz kia hay

*Teez Dhoop Main Chalay Aatay Hain Meri Janab *
*Doostoon Nay Mujhay Sahra Ka Shajar Jana Hay *

Keep it up .....

rabia_rana · August 8, 2006, 10:45am

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shukria Zalima,
**issi dunai mai hain abho tak khair say:) **

rabia_rana · August 8, 2006, 10:51am

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thanx Sannan ,
app k is shair per mai jawab don gi k,
KUCH APNAY DIL PR BHI ZAKHM KHAO,MERAY LAHOO SAY BAHAR KAB TAK
MUJHAY SAHARA BANANAY WALON,MAI LERKHARAY TU KIA KARO GAY

rabia_rana · August 8, 2006, 10:55am

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THANX A LOT MUSLIM GIRL, HEART HACKER, GOOD NEWS N IMPRESSIONIST...THANX AGAIN

Sannan · August 8, 2006, 11:02am

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Oh hoye what a she'r of a everlasting ghazal ........

Meray Shouq-e-janoon ka mazaq uranay waloon
Tumhari Zulfoon Key barhami ka Zikar Aaya To kia Karo Gay

Muslim_girl_1 · August 8, 2006, 10:27pm

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^^ veyr nice sannan g n rabia g..both of u r excellent......

Sannan · August 9, 2006, 3:04am

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Shukaria MG iss izzat afzai ka

rabia_rana · August 9, 2006, 9:24am

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nawazish hai muslim girl app ki

Muslim_girl_1 · August 9, 2006, 9:05pm

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plzzzzzzzzzz aap donon mujhe apni shagirdi mein lay lain....bohat impress hoon mein aap donon ki shairi se...........

Sannan · August 10, 2006, 3:29am

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Main To naheen Laita Shagirdi main keonkah main to khud tifal-e-maktab hoon leekan Haya G Ko Aap Ustaani Bana Sakti hain …waisay aap Zameen Par kiss Jagah Rahti Hain …

Muslim_girl_1 · August 10, 2006, 5:19pm

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chalain koi baat nahi rabia g toh hain na.....aur mein zameen per jiss jagah rahti hoon aur jagah ka naam hai......"Gher".........:D

Sannan · August 11, 2006, 3:22am

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:D i thought u live in Den like me ....

rabia_rana · August 11, 2006, 12:30pm

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MG bahut shukria lakin abhi tu mujhay khud kuch nahi aya app ko kia sikhaon gi...............lakin app kai liye aik advice hai k mutalla karain gehraye say or smajh kr perhain tu yaqenan ajaye ga bcoz ye tu GOD GIFTED TALENT hai kahin say milta nahi hai is k illawa agr app ko koi bhi help chahiye tu i will b there .....thek na........khush raho........ALLAH NEGAHBAN