hey guys i am going for a professional shahiri competition soon.but i need to brush up my skills as i havnt done it in a while.can someone tell me how i am doing so far with few of them i have written so far.here it is:
metai vado pila pila kai asmano tak outa dia hai tum nei…MATAI VADOOOOOOOO!!..Pila pila kai asmano…tak outa dia hai tum nei..
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maga jub rak nahi saki to jatal kai sula deha tum nai!
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