Nazm

madz124 · February 4, 2014, 3:57pm

This is the edited version of one of my “better” poems. hehe thought I would share. :halo:

mahool · February 4, 2014, 4:00pm

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I can not see text…

madz124 · February 4, 2014, 4:09pm

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Me neither. I don’t know how to fix this.

madz124 · February 4, 2014, 4:27pm

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Okay I think the issue is fixed now.

mahool · February 4, 2014, 4:27pm

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Azad Nazam?

madz124 · February 4, 2014, 5:27pm

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Ji. Thoughts?

mahool · February 4, 2014, 5:31pm

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Will tell... I need more time....

madz124 · February 4, 2014, 7:18pm

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Kisi ne nahi parhni tu phir main delete kar deti hon.

mahool · February 4, 2014, 7:19pm

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wasal ki arzo bhi
judai ki khalish bhi…

mahool · February 4, 2014, 7:20pm

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Ajnabi musafir ko mery pass rehny do…

mahool · February 4, 2014, 7:22pm

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kafi udass hai.. aesa lagta hia… bandi ro rahi hia…

_Iraj · February 5, 2014, 4:51pm

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achi hy

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 6, 2014, 8:24am

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Nice : ) keep it up

chacha_Ghalib · February 12, 2014, 9:36am

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that's pretty good

muqawwee123 · February 12, 2014, 10:29am

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kar do. sawab mile ga

PS: achi koshish hai. mazeed mehnat ki zaroorat nahin hai

madz124 · February 12, 2014, 4:18pm

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Kyon, meri nazm kya kuch ghalat promote kar rahi hai? Jaayen, nahi karni delete

madz124 · February 12, 2014, 4:19pm

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Thank you!