NAZM: "yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

poet · August 15, 2002, 6:35pm

“yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo”

bohat afsurda rehta hooN
mujhe thoRi khushi de do
mire ghamgeen chehre ko
zara si ik haNsi de do

yahaaN har su udaasi hai
yahaaN har su andhere haiN
yahaaN rehbar naheeN koii
luTere hi luTere haiN

gham-e-janaaN hi kya kam tha
gham-e-doraaN meiN jalta hooN
ajab ab haal hai mera
na rukta hooN na chalta hooN

magar is raah par koi
barahna pa chale kab tak
ke har dam aah-o-zaari ke
bhala yeh masghale kab tak

suno ab thak chuka hooN maiN
mujhe aa kar saNbhaalo tum
bohat bezaar hooN khud se
mujhe apna bana lo tum

mujhe duniya se kya matlab
mira tum maal sab le lo
mujhe kuchh saa’ateN de kar
yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo

Shoaib

chand_chehra · August 15, 2002, 8:38pm

very nice

SunnyBoy · August 16, 2002, 3:34am

very nice.

Nayab · August 16, 2002, 4:23am

Re: NAZM: "yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

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*Originally posted by poet: *
"yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

bohat afsurda rehta hooN
mujhe thoRi khushi de do
mire ghamgeen chehre ko
zara si ik haNsi de do

yahaaN har su udaasi hai
yahaaN har su andhere haiN
yahaaN rehbar naheeN koii
luTere hi luTere haiN

gham-e-janaaN hi kya kam tha
gham-e-doraaN meiN jalta hooN
ajab ab haal hai mera
na rukta hooN na chalta hooN

magar is raah par koi
barahna pa chale kab tak
ke har dam aah-o-zaari ke
bhala yeh masghale kab tak

suno ab thak chuka hooN maiN
mujhe aa kar saNbhaalo tum
bohat bezaar hooN khud se
mujhe apna bana lo tum

mujhe duniya se kya matlab
mira tum maal sab le lo
mujhe kuchh saa'ateN de kar
yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo

Shoaib
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WOW...bohot khoob.....Bohot achi choice hai aap ki.....I like it:)

poet · August 16, 2002, 11:26am

thanks

Thank you.

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
very nice
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poet · August 16, 2002, 11:27am

thanks

Thank you.

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*Originally posted by SunnyBoy: *
very nice.
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poet · August 16, 2002, 11:28am

Re: Re: NAZM: "yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

Thank you Nayab,

Actually it is not a choice. This one is by yours' truly:) Thanks for appreciation.

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*Originally posted by Nayab: *

WOW...bohot khoob.....Bohot achi choice hai aap ki.....I like it:)
[/QUOTE]

Nayab · August 16, 2002, 3:23pm

Re: Re: Re: NAZM: “yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo”

Ohhhhhhhhhh ya i c

Pehalwan · August 16, 2002, 3:35pm

wah wah g wah wah poet g maza aagaya aap ney hamesha ki tarhan zabardast khail pesh kiya hay

poet · August 17, 2002, 11:38am

Pehalwan saahab, kisi ki jaan jaaye aur aap ko yeh khel mahsoos ho, yeh kahaaN ka insaaf hai;-)

bohat shukriya aap ka:)

Shoaib

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*Originally posted by Pehalwan: *
wah wah g wah wah poet g maza aagaya aap ney hamesha ki tarhan zabardast khail pesh kiya hay
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Mahee · August 17, 2002, 2:59pm

bohat khobsuret shoaib jee. bohat khoob. maza aa gya

Rameesha · August 17, 2002, 6:28pm

Re: NAZM: "yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by poet: *
"yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo"

yahaaN har su udaasi hai
yahaaN har su andhere haiN
yahaaN rehbar naheeN koii
luTere hi luTere haiN

gham-e-janaaN hi kya kam tha
gham-e-doraaN meiN jalta hooN
ajab ab haal hai mera
na rukta hooN na chalta hooN

magar is raah par koi
barahna pa chale kab tak
ke har dam aah-o-zaari ke
bhala yeh masghale kab tak

suno ab thak chuka hooN maiN
mujhe aa kar saNbhaalo tum
bohat bezaar hooN khud se
mujhe apna bana lo tum

mujhe duniya se kya matlab
mira tum maal sab le lo
mujhe kuchh saa'ateN de kar
yeh maah-o-saal sab le lo

Shoaib
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buhat umdaa ... keep it up jee