NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*(meri zindagi ki doosri nazm)

“Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”
** Raat bheeg jaati hai
Chaand bheeg jaata hai
Jab bhi teri yaadon k
Baadalon mein liptte se
Ashk behne lagte hain
Aur dil sulagte hain
Waqt ki ravaani mein
Baadalon k paani mein
Raat bheeg jaati hai
Chaand bheeg jaata hai
Raat k andhere mein
Teergi k ghayray mein
Roshni bikherti hai
Aur teri yaadon ka
Kaarvaa(n) guzarta hai
Phool band hote hain
Aah c ubharti hai
Ik ajeeb c dil mein
Khaamshi utarti hai
Tab kisi ki aankhon mein
Aansuon k paani mein
Raat bheeg jaati hai
Chaand bheeg jaata hai.**
(poet: Zamil)
[RIGHT](written in Jan’1997)[/RIGHT]

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Re: NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

Bohat Khoob Zamil..........THIS IS RECORDING!!!!!!!!!
BTW Zamil app hamein ye gud news kab suna rahy hein k app ki book ahnay wali hai???

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Re: NAZM: “Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”

Very nice indeed Zamil :k: … keep it up :slight_smile:

Every 1111 th poster WINS.....
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Re: NAZM: “Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”

**Thanx alotttt Amal !:slight_smile: **

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Re: NAZM: “Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”

Ye “BTW” kuch samajh nahi aaya:confused: .
**Or meri bookkkkk !!!:eek: **

Mere ash’aar ki shohrat teri rusvaai na ho !
**Bas yehi soch k gum-naam ho gaya hoon main:blush: **

OR

Is daur mein ham fan-kaaron ko
**Marte hain to shohrat milti hai :teary2: **

Ye to ash’aar they par haqiqat ye hai k ;

Charkh-e-sukhan par kitne taare
**Sab se chhotta taara main :frowning: **
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**Pasandeedgi ka bohatttt shukria! Khush rahiye.:slight_smile: **

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Re: NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

BTW.................... By The Way:)

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Re: NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

Wah.. . bahoot achaa andaz eey tahreer ... Zamil .

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Re: NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

*Bhaee Bohat Shukria Khalid Sir !:) *

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Re: NAZM: "Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai"

gud zamil when u have written this plz inform its a toche poem :) chao

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Re: NAZM: “Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”

Boht khoob :flower1:

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Re: NAZM: “Chaand Bheeg Jaata Hai”

Bohat Shukria :flower2: