NAZM " Aakhir-Kaar "

YooN to main dunia ki zyada parwa nahi karta lekin jaane kis mood ki likhi hui ye nazm parsoN nazar se guzri to socha share karooN…here it is…

[INDENT][INDENT]**Aakhir-Kaar
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[/INDENT][/INDENT]Wafaa o ishq par ham shaairy mein kis qadar likhein !
KahaaN tak hijr likhein, kab talak ranj-e-jigar likhein !




Kabhi to khud-ba-khud ham par udaasi ki inaayat ho
Kabhi dil ko udaasi k na hone ki shikaayat ho


Kabhi tanhaai ki chaahat, kabhi logoN se be-zaari
Kabhi mehfil se ho nafrat, kabhi mehfil lage pyaari


Kabhi ham bolne par aayeN to bole chale jaayeN
Kitaab-e-zaat ko har shakhs pe khole chale jaayeN


Kabhi chup hoN to pathar k kisi but ka gumaaN guzre
Khamoshi dil lubhaati ho, sadaa hamko garaaN guzre


KahaaN tak yaad-e-maazi saath le kar ham jiye jaayeN
Hamesha kis tarha she’roN ko ik hi rukh diye jaayeN


KahaaN tak apne daaman ko lahu se tar-ba-tar likhein
KahaaN tak zindagaani ko andheroN ka bhaNvar likhein




Kabhi ujRi hui haalat banaaye shehr mein niklein
Mohabbat k bharam ko ham bhulaaye shehr mein niklein


Kabhi ham dostoN se zindagi ka gham cHupaate hoN
Kabhi ghairoN ko dil ki daastaanein sab sunaate hoN


Kabhi ham raunaqein chaahein, kabhi viraaniyaaN chaahein
Ajab c baat hai, khush hoN to gham-samaaniyaaN chaahein


Hua tha ishq ham ko, phir gham-e-hijraaN mila ham ko
Naya kya tha bhala is mein k jo batlaayeN aalam ko !


YuNhi itne baras ik dillagi k naam kar Daale
YuNhi she’roN mein qisse aashiqi k aam kar Daale


YuNhi chanchal sheher ko ham udaasi ka nagar likhein !
YuNhi aabaad ghar ko kab talak veeraan ghar likhein !




Zara ab waqt ko marham lagaane ki ijaazat dein
Jigar k zakhm ko ab bhar hi jaane ki ijaazat dein


Kabhi khud par udaasi koi bhi taari na hone dein
Kisi gham se ab is dil ki kabhi yaari na hone dein


Sheher mein, sheher waaloN ko kabhi ungli uThaane ka
Koi mauqa hi na dein ham unhein baatein banaane ka


Chalo yaksaaniyat ko shaairy se khatm kar Daalein
Chalo dunia pe pehle se zara haT kar nazar Daalein


Chalo ham zindagi se hijr ka mausam badal Daalein
Sukhan ki us puraani c ravish ko ham badal Daalein


Chalo ham zindagaani ko umeedoN ka shajar likhein !
ShaboN ko dar-ba-dar likhein ! chalo koi sahar likhein !


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[/INDENT]Feb’ 2001

Re: NAZM " Aakhir-Kaar "

It's wonderful Zamil.. Your usage of words is very powerful...! Thank you for sharing... One question.. Would you mind if I'd save it?

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boht khob uncle thore se mushkil the lekin me nea samgh le kese se:blush:
ab 7 nahe bolna :no:

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bohat achay lafzoon ka istimal or rabt kay sath likha hay

muzoo bhi zabrdast hay i like whole poem ..

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Hua tha ishq ham ko, phir gham-e-hijraaN mila ham ko
Naya kya tha bhala is mein k jo batlaayeN aalam ko

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this one i like most

Re: NAZM " Aakhir-Kaar "

BaRi nawazish Janab :)
Na g, ham ne kiyuN mind karna, aap bilkul save karein.
Is qadar-daani ka bhi shukria :)

Re: NAZM " Aakhir-Kaar "

Bohat Shukria MM :slight_smile:
Aur 7 to main aapki age k liye likhta huN coz aap sab ko “uncle” jo kehti hain :CareBear:

Re: NAZM " Aakhir-Kaar "

this one i like most

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Is darja paziraai pe be-had mashkoor hooN :)
Khush rahiye

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Very nice ...................:) :) :)

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Thank You :)

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Amazing stuff Zamil, buhat zabardast likha hey, jitni bhi tareef ki jaaey kam hey ...thanks for sharing this beauty:-)

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Pasandeedgi k liye be-haddddd shukria :)

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beautiful....jitnee tareef karain kam hai..............buhat khoob likha hai

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Zamil, I missed your appearance back in Feb this year. I would have welcomed you in. You didn't post anything from from August 07 to Feb 08. Its been many months again. Please post some more.

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wah wah sahib… kaya baat hai

bohat hi aala likha hai :k: kaya rawaani hai… maza aa gaya parh kay

how come old poets don’t post anymore :naraz:

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Woww... its beautiful...

zamil, where r u?

miss ur poetry .. .. . .

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very good nazm. thanks for sharing.