nazar ki dhoop mey sayee gholay heen shab ki tirhan
may kab udas nahe tha mager na ab ki tirhan
pher aj sher_e_tamana ki rahguzaroon say
guzer rahey heen kaee log rozey shab ki tirhan
tujhey tu mey nay bari arzoo say chaha tha
ya kia key chor chala tu bhe aur sab ki tirhan
fasurdagi hey mager wajay gum nahee maloom
key dill pay bojh sa hey ranj bay sabab ki tirhan
khelay tu ab key bhe gulshan mey phool heen liken
na meray zakham ki surat na terey lab ki tirhan
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hi friends tell me about this nazam how is it
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thanx saroo u also have a good zoq that,s why u liked it will app ki bhe nazams achi hoti heen ![]()
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good..well ghazal sahiba aap ko nazmoon ka shauq kab say hova ??
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lala ji thanx to like it oh u aske me mujhey ka say skoke howa so ya janam janam ki bateien heen asan nahe heen en ko samjhna but lala ji zoq aur shok ka koi mole nahe
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Beautiful
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Ghazal Rizvi Gi… Although Its Very Good.. BUT Hum Ye kehnay ki Jurrat Karengay ke its not Nazam, Its Ghazal ![]()
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`well jurat karien achi bate heey aur thanx to tell me app ney pare samjh aye well ya he kafi well thanx to like it golden scorpion
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^ U r Most Welcome :)
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Hmmm very nice one Ghazal Ji....
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Salam,
Bohat Achhi Ghazal hay,
Ye bataiay ke shaair kon hay is khoobsoorat ghazal ka.
Aur haan ghazal ko ghazal hi kehna chahieay.
Friend4u4ever.
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thanks to like it ahmed faraz ki ki ghazal hey ya i know it ghazal is ghazal but there is another ghazel well thanks ![]()
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thanks to like it khan sahib ![]()
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u too:)