jo naqsh dil pe hai,nadani main dekha tha haqeeqat ban gaya wo kab jo kahani main dekha tha
haqeer itna na jano k zawal tumhain b ana hai wo khaak ka zara bana jo tabani main dekha tha
kafir bana dia mujhe ik sajde ki khott ne wo aks to kho gaya jise pani main dekha tha
chand kiun amawas ki god main ja chupa jo roshni lutata jan fishani main dekha tha
gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho wo khwab tha or beet gaya jo jawani main dekha tha
rahi hum ko raqabat ishq karne walon se wo muhabbat dargor hui jisay gumnami main dekha tha
ab khali hath,khali dil,khali daman hai na wo aks,na khwab,na he rang hain kahin bas ik naheef sa dhaba jawedani main dekha tha…
Amal
March 16, 2011, 2:05pm
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jo naqsh dil pe hai,nadani main dekha tha haqeeqat ban gaya wo kab jo kahani main dekha tha
haqeer itna na jano k zawal tumhain b ana hai wo khaak ka zara bana jo tabani main dekha tha
kafir bana dia mujhe ik sajde ki khott ne wo aks to kho gaya jise pani main dekha tha
chand kiun amawas ki god main ja chupa jo roshni lutata jan fishani main dekha tha
gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho wo khwab tha or beet gaya jo jawani main dekha tha
rahi hum ko raqabat ishq karne walon se wo muhabbat dargor hui jisay gumnami main dekha tha
Achi ghazal kahi hey aap ney Shazia ji. Mehnat aur mashq jaari rakhye…likhti rahiye aur share karti rahiye
ab khali hath,khali dil,khali daman hai na wo aks,na khwab,na he rang hain kahin bas ik naheef sa dhaba jawedani main dekha tha…
Teen misroN wala maqta nahi chaley ga :nono:
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shazia ap ki poetry boht achi hoti hai. hamesha ki tarah mujy ye bhi boht pasand ai :)
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achi kavish rahi.... likhti rahiye..khush rahiye :-)
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thanx for liking every one.
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shazia baji
main sadkay,main vari,yahan comments post kerne hain per tum ne apni foto post ker di
Sannan
March 24, 2011, 6:11am
13
Re: NAQSH…
kafir bana dia mujhe ik sajde ki khott ne
chand kiun amawas ki god main ja chupa
soooooooooper
gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho
iss she’r key pahla misra simply cool " gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho"
Re: NAQSH…
Sannan:
kafir bana dia mujhe ik sajde ki khott ne
chand kiun amawas ki god main ja chupa
soooooooooper
gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho
iss she’r key pahla misra simply cool " gaye barson ki bat chorro ab kya kehte ho"
thanx for liking
Sannan
March 24, 2011, 6:19am
15
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Jawani mein
acha now serious
Sannan
March 24, 2011, 6:40am
17
Re: NAQSH…
acha acha
uss khawab bheegi barsatoon mein baha do bajay jawani mein
itna na hasain ustaad g agar mene apni jawani main likha tha to ap to mere ustad-e-mohtaram to phir ap to qabar se 5 qadam door reh gay bas 
