~*~ Nakaam Aashiq..!

blushing_vision · August 31, 2004, 9:07am

Teri baraat hogi Mera janaza hoga

4 admi tere sath honge 4 admi mere sath honge

Phool tujhe per bhi honge Phool mujhe per bhi honge

Tujhe per dulhan ka jora hoga Mujh per kafan ki sajawat hogi

Lali tere chahre per hogi Noor mere chahre per hoga

Khubsoorat tum bhi lag rahi hogi Khubsoorat main bhi lag raha honga

" FERK SIRF ITNA HOGA " Tum kisi ki zindagi main ja rahi hogi Main tumhari zindagi se ja raha honga

Mera naseeb teri kismat se acha hoga

Mera gham teri khushi se acha hoga

Yakeen na aae to apni ankhoon se dekhna

Mera janaza teri baraat se acha hoga

Mere samne rukhsat jo teri baraat hogi

Us lamhe gul-e-shamay hayaat hogi

Wo bhi jan kesi aafat ki raat hogi

Pehloo main kisi k meri qainat hogi.

Pyara_sa_doost · August 31, 2004, 12:10pm

hmmmmmmm seems very sad blushing

to touthy but nice kaha acha kaha

keep it up :)

ta ta :)

Capricorn · September 1, 2004, 8:10am

Re: ~*~ Nakaam Aashiq..!

Zabardast :k: :k: :k:
I like the pain and the beauty of comparative situation analysis in this poem. Its amazingly painful yet entertaining in the sense that the author doesnt seem to be de-glorifying his love or cursing her.

I dont think it is written by you as you seem to be a girl while the writer here is male…

Is their anything wrong managing these forums by the Moderators?

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 1, 2004, 9:15am

Really nice.. :k:

aap ki apni hai ye kia?

Seedha_Saada · September 2, 2004, 7:28am

:k:

koiDost · September 2, 2004, 10:40am

HH Jee aap ki our mari soch kitni milti hai

Pramod · September 2, 2004, 5:50pm

Good posting...but as it is not yours it should have been posted in other section of poetry...
anyway...thanks..I read it after a long time...

Seedha_Saada · September 10, 2004, 8:53am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Good posting...but as it is not yours it should have been posted in other section of poetry...
anyway...thanks..I read it after a long time...
[/QUOTE]

Is any body listening here?
I think this is the best forum to post as there is no regulation ;)

chodhry · September 10, 2004, 3:41pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Seedha Saada: *

Is any body listening here?
I think this is the best forum to post as there is no regulation ;)
[/QUOTE]

u know what? it is the dumped cornor room ;)

Dilsay · September 10, 2004, 8:30pm

" FERK SIRF ITNA HOGA " Tum kisi ki zindagi main ja rahi hogi Main tumhari zindagi se ja raha honga

Wah........... there is nothing more i can say thn this...

Seedha_Saada · September 11, 2004, 10:57am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

u know what? it is the dumped cornor room ;)
[/QUOTE]

Kisee ko gher lao na yahan, guppein maarte hain ;)

system · October 9, 2004, 7:55pm

Really nice and beautiful.:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 9, 2004, 9:59pm

so who is the poet then .. ..

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 9, 2004, 10:00pm

oh tareef karna bohl gaye .. this is really beautifull .. two thumbz up .. .. per poet ka naam plz ..