Really Nice Afsana by you Shaiza i really appreciate your writing capabilities… But i’m afraid you will not be able to get any feedback here … I hope you are contributing on some urdu sites …wish you best of luck …
MOD i’m wondering why we ve to click every link to read that image rather in previous section it was readable without clicking …
I think being lonely mad some mistakes while embedding the image.
good, you can write and always write better
diction thoughts feelings need words to be expressed
when transforming something from ur mind to expression do consider 2 or3 alternate words
and most of all choose the style u wana write in
you r good in writing keep it up
thanx 4 the appereciation but Mod decided 2 start some afsanh compitition so that i posted it here but unfortunately no 1 else participated in:(
I told you in the first place to start your thread in literature but you said i don't know anybody there so i said ok you can start it in poetry section but when i see no feedback there i moved your thread in the right section.Here you can get positive feedback and you have a chance to make friends here.Best of luck.
i really appreciate your writing capabilities… But i’m afraid you will not be able to get any feedback here … I hope you are contributing on some urdu sites …wish you best of luck …