Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi, raat aahista aahista dhalti rahi
Saaray OoraQ-e-Ghum muntashir hOgaye, dair tak dil main aandhi si chalti rahi

Ghaas thi jugnuOn ko chupaye huye, Pair thay teergi main nahaye huye
Aik konay main sar ko jhukaye huye, Dard ki shama afsurda jalti rahi

Pehlay din tha mOhabbat ki barsat ka, Waqt theraa tha tujhse mulaqat ka
Qatra Qatra guzarti rahin saa’aten, Saaye letay rahay. Dhoop chalti rahi

Ranj pichli mOhabbat k sehtay thay hUm, Aik hi Karya Jaan main rehtay thay hum
Din dhalay ya kisi subha k MOr par, Apnay milnay ki surat nikalti rahi

Aik raatOn main bichri hui raat main, Hum akailay tha khuab mulaqat main
Chal paray dono aik dusray ki taraf, Khuab Ghat’ta raha, Raat dhalti rahi

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

Naaaaaiceeeee!

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

w0w.. its superb.. beautiful.. :bb:

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

"Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi, raat aahista aahista dhalti rahi"

Meri bhi ajj raat yahi halat thi..
seriously.. well coz me is bemaar.. to is lie. lol
saari raat karwat hi badalta raha.!

anyways.. beautiful sharing.!

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

karwatein badaltay rahay saari raat hum … aap ki kasam :slight_smile:

Nice poem :k:

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

v nice

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

thanx eve 1 for appreciation

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

wow kuriye....its zabardast :)

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

thanx JWali :)

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

woww! beautiful .. bheegiyaad

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

thanx moon :)

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

Buhat KhoooooB :~)

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

:hoonh: thanx

Re: Nain Khultay na thay, neend aati na thi

Bohat khoob Bheegiyaad...