!~* Nahi Maloom *~!

Philanthrope · November 20, 2003, 1:31pm

Savan ki jhari lagi hai.. Aur main khirki say taik lagae Madhur manzar ko apnay aankhon kay dareechon main qaid kernay ki koshish ker rahi hon Aaaj voh aanay vala hai.. Uss kay aanay keh ehsas nay Yeh manzar aur bhi haseen bana diya hai... Barish ka ik ik qatra jaise gohar.. Mairay dil kay band nihaan boseeda tareek khanoon main gir raha hai Aur mitti ki khushbo fiza ko mo'attar ker rahi hai Andar say ya bahar say.,, Nahi maloom

Dafatan..
Phone ki bell baji
Tumharay na aanay ki ittlaa aae
Koi kam per gaya hai..
Uff!!
Maine khirki kay pat band ker diye
Achanak habs berh gaya hai
Andar ka ya bahar ka…
Nahi maloom

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
( Philanthrope )**

Dilsay · November 20, 2003, 2:49pm

Very nice

system · November 20, 2003, 3:17pm

Wonderful…

Azad · November 21, 2003, 5:36am

humm

Capricorn · November 21, 2003, 8:50am

Nice :k: :k:

Philanthrope · November 21, 2003, 6:27pm

Thanks :-)

ASA · November 21, 2003, 6:32pm

Waaah...

Sohaib · November 21, 2003, 11:31pm

Re: !~* Nahi Maloom *~!

bohut achay :k: very nicely done.

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 22, 2003, 2:57am

beautiful:k:

cuteepie · November 22, 2003, 3:34am

:k:

BeWaQooF · November 22, 2003, 6:43am

Super

:k:

Philanthrope · November 22, 2003, 6:33pm

Bohat bohat shukriya pasand kernay ka :-)

chodhry · November 24, 2003, 9:56am

Re: !~* Nahi Maloom *~!

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Savan ki jhari lagi hai..
Aur main khirki say taik lagae
Madhur manzar ko apnay aankhon kay dareechon main qaid kernay ki koshish ker rahi hon
Aaaj voh aanay vala hai..
Uss kay aanay keh ehsas nay
Yeh manzar aur bhi haseen bana diya hai...
Barish ka ik ik qatra jaise gohar..
Mairay dil kay band nihaan boseeda tareek khanoon main gir raha hai
**Aur mitti ki khushbo fiza ko mo'attar ker rahi hai*
Andar say ya bahar say.,,
Nahi maloom

Dafatan..
Phone ki bell baji
Tumharay na aanay ki ittlaa aae
Koi kam per gaya hai..
Uff!!
Maine khirki kay pat band ker diye
Achanak habs berh gaya hai
Andar ka ya bahar ka...
Nahi maloom

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
( Philanthrope )**
[/QUOTE]

Ambreen bohat bohat acha llikha aap ney. jis terhah aap ney visulaize kerwaya its amazing one of the best poem i ve read in past few days. keep it up.

Sohail_A · November 24, 2003, 11:59pm

Re: !~* Nahi Maloom *~!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Savan ki jhari lagi hai..
Aur main khirki say taik lagae
Madhur manzar ko apnay aankhon kay dareechon main qaid kernay ki koshish ker rahi hon
Aaaj voh aanay vala hai..
Uss kay aanay keh ehsas nay
Yeh manzar aur bhi haseen bana diya hai...
Barish ka ik ik qatra jaise gohar..
Mairay dil kay band nihaan boseeda tareek khanoon main gir raha hai
Aur mitti ki khushbo fiza ko mo'attar ker rahi hai
Andar say ya bahar say.,,
Nahi maloom

Dafatan..
Phone ki bell baji
Tumharay na aanay ki ittlaa aae
Koi kam per gaya hai..
Uff!!
Maine khirki kay pat band ker diye
Achanak habs berh gaya hai
Andar ka ya bahar ka...
Nahi maloom

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
( Philanthrope )**
[/QUOTE]

:)

pagaldeewani · November 25, 2003, 3:19am

phil sis, gr8 stuff yaar :)

Philanthrope · November 25, 2003, 6:44pm

Re: Re: !~* Nahi Maloom *~!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *
Ambreen bohat bohat acha llikha aap ney. jis terhah aap ney visulaize kerwaya its amazing one of the best poem i ve read in past few days. keep it up.
[/QUOTE]
Thanks a lot for liking Mr.Chodhry.. I am flattered really :)

Thanks pagaldeewani & Sohail..