nahi kartay....

Ansoon · May 16, 2003, 2:01pm

salamz all..

mein poetry form mein kuch zabardast collections parh raha tha kay i came up with the following. hope you like it..

totay howay sitaroon ko jora nahi kartay
becharay howay loggoon ko dobara manga nahi kartay
hum tou woh hain jou maray khushi kay
atay howay ghum ko roka nahi kartay

thanks

Capricorn · May 16, 2003, 2:43pm

:)

ASA · May 16, 2003, 3:00pm

very nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 16, 2003, 5:00pm

Good one:k:

Galaxy · May 16, 2003, 6:31pm

zabardast:k:

koiDost · May 16, 2003, 9:29pm

ahan! gr8 :k: