**Kuch Aur Lamhaat Meri Diary kay Meray Yaar Darwesh Key Farmaish Par … Aab Bardashat Karna Aap Ka Kaam Hay . … **
Naheen Bhool Paoon Ga
Woh Shaam
Jub Meri Har Faryad
Bikharti Rahi
Sisakti Rahi
Naheen Bhool Paoon Ga
Aab bus Ek
Khawahish Hay Kah
Kaash To Bhi Kabhi
Faryaadi Banay
Nazm achhi hai, mukhtasar Nazm Main Sari Faryaad Karlena Har kisi ke Bas Ki Baat Nahi... Saath Hi Bari Tajurbe wali Nazm Hia.... Khushbash, Magar Meri Jan.... Aisi Faryaad Nahi Karte... Ab Maaf Bhi Kardo... "Iss Tarha To Hota Hai....Iss Tarha Ke Kamon Main " Taza Koshish Karo, Hum Tumhare Saath Hain.... ! Cheers.
Nazm achhi hai, mukhtasar Nazm Main Sari Faryaad Karlena Har kisi ke Bas Ki Baat Nahi... Saath Hi Bari Tajurbe wali Nazm Hia.... Khushbash,Magar Meri Jan.... Aisi Faryaad Nahi Karte... Ab Maaf Bhi Kardo..."Iss Tarha To Hota Hai....Iss Tarha Ke Kamon Main "Taza Koshish Karo, Hum Tumhare Saath Hain.... ! Cheers.
Darwesh.
Darwesh baba,
Khna asan hy k maaf krdo,krna mushkil. Ab sab Darwesh sifat nah ap ki trha.
Sanna's Nazam reminds me an old song, Is main bhi bad Dua hy(Bad Duya Song first time I heard at that time and now this Nazam by Sannan) ,
Tera kisi py ay dil tu bhi kabhi byqrar hu
Tu bhi kalyja tham kr kabhi chilay hay dil
Huzoor, Maaf karna, Ya darguzar karna, itna muskil bhi nahi, jitna nazar aata hai, phir maaf kardene se banda khud halka hojata hai, warna **
**badle ki aag, pahle aapko jalati hai, phir doosre tak Aanch ponhachti hai, aur jab aap apni aag main jal chuke hote hain, to waspi ka rasta mushkil hojata hai, bahtar yahi hai, ke darguzar kiya jaye aur pichli ghalati ya nadani se istifada uthtate hue, agla qadam utaya jaye, Han iss bahane do char achhi Nazmain zaroor Kahni Chahiye, Yeh Mouqa Bhi Sab Ko Kahan Naseeb, think positive. Mujhe Maloom Hai Kahna Aasaan hai, Magar baghair Kiye, andazah bhi kaise ho. Sab se Pahle Tu Aap Mujhe Maaf Kijye, Ke aapka qeemti waqt zayaa kiya, magar iss mafi se aap tajurba zaroor hasil karenge.
" DUSHMANI JAM KAR KARO, LEKIN YEH GUNJAISH RAHE
** JAB KABHI HUM DOST HON SHARMINDA E KHAATIR NA HON "**
Huzoor, Maaf karna, Ya darguzar karna, itna muskil bhi nahi, jitna nazar aata hai, phir maaf kardene se banda khud halka hojata hai, warna **
**badle ki aag, pahle aapko jalati hai, phir doosre tak Aanch ponhachti hai, aur jab aap apni aag main jal chuke hote hain, to waspi ka rasta mushkil hojata hai, bahtar yahi hai, ke darguzar kiya jaye aur pichli ghalati yaSab se Pahle Tu Aap Mujhe Maaf Kijye, Ke aapka qeemti waqt zayaa kiya, magar iss mafi se aap tajurba zaroor hasil karenge.
" DUSHMANI JAM KAR KARO, LEKIN YEH GUNJAISH RAHEJAB KABHI HUM DOST HON SHARMINDA E KHAATIR NA HON "
Darwesh.
Darwesh Baba,
Khuda ki qasam teen age yad dila di , when I was ateenager I just have these thinkings, Magar jab musalsal tum muaaf kro or dar guzar kro or dosry log isy tumhari kamzori samajh kr mati main milany ki koshish krin tu stand lyna prta hy ,or Sannan **jysa majbor stand na ly saky tu woh bad dua pr hi guzara krta hy.aysy logon k sath tu wohi hoa na
Ham ah bhi krty haoin tu ho jaty hain badnam
Woh qatal bhi krty hain tu charcha nahi hota
Ajzi or darguzar achi cheez hy inkar nahi magar Zulam sah kr chup krna Sabar or darguzar nahi Jabr k agy sar jhukana hy Baqool Qatil Shifai,
Qateel Os sa bhi munafiq nahi koi
Ju zulm bhi shta hy or charcha nahi krta(shyr ka wazan think nahi sahih kro)
Wasy lagta hy ap dil sy kh rhy hain bat asar rkhti hy khas tur pr
**DUSHMANI JAM KAR KARO, LEKIN YEH GUNJAISH RAHE
*JAB KABHI HUM DOST HON SHARMINDA E KHAATIR NA HON *
Muttaasir kun. BYnazir or Nwaz Sarifh ki dosti is ki taza misal hy;)
rahi ap ko maaf krny ki bat tu main ny os sy ziada waqat ly liya hisab brabr. hahahahahahahaha Mafi ki gunjaish nishta.Prhna tu pry ga.{sar drad ka ilaj tlwar k nishan wali do goli dispreen}Muhhaaaaaahahahaha
Yahan Baat, Zulm Sahne ki Nahi Thi... Darweshi Main Bhi Zulm Sahna Gunah Hai, Yahan Baat sirf Dil Ke Mamlaat Ki Thi, main to sannan ke "sitamgar saathi ' ka mamnoon hun, uski wajha se mera Yaar Shair Ban Gaya, kuch banne ke liye to kuch qurbaan karna parta hi hai, Woh Sitamgar Aakhri stop, thora hi thi... Sannan aaj bhi, gitaar baja raha hai, aur practically khush hai, mera kahna bas yeh tha, pichli yaad main, Aanhen zaroor bharo..ke ek aadh achhi Nazm Ho Jaye, Magar, itna practical bhi raho, ke agli dosti Rayegan Na Jaye... Iss Ishq Ke Case Main Aap Politics aur Siyaasi logon ka zikr kaise ? Hum to bas yeh dua dete hain.... MERA PAIGHAM MOHABBAT HAI JAHAN TAK PONCHE.... khushbash.
Darwesh Sahab,
Thanks for quick reply. Jhan tak Sannan ka mamla hy os ka khna hy Darwesh ki dua sy(Hosla afzai) bna hon shair tu.Ham ny socha Darwesh tu bhan hy Asal fitna gar kon hy:confused: kal pocha tha magar abhi tak jwab nahi aya.
Huzoor…( Darwesh to bhan hy Asal Fitna gar Kaun Hai ) Meri samajh main Nahi Aaya, Yeh Sawaal mere Liye Hai Ya Sannan Ke liye ? zara matbal samjhayen ? Achha Maze Ki Baat Yeh Hai, ke Sannan Ka Seminar Chal Raha Hai, aur Aashiq E Zaar, kahin Ghaib hai.. Hum Yunhi khoon jala rahe hain ? cheers. Darwesh.
Hahahahahahah yeh Bhana tha typo:) Bahany bnana koi tum sy sikhy like that.
Sannan k liy swal tha, Magar soch main pr giya hy kia khy.Bilkul sahih kha Snnan pr bat ho rhi hy ham khoon jla rhy hain or os ka hal bzbany shair,
[Jany na jany Gul hi na jany bagh tu sara jany hy] cheers
wasy ye thread shuro kysy krty hain:confused: I am new here:(
Sahi Kaha....Bagh To Sara Jane Hai.... Huzoor, jis tarha "ADD REPLY' par aap taba aazmayee karte/karti hain, isi **ke bazu main 'NEW TOPIC' ka button Apka Muntazir Hai... to ho jaye kuch** pharakta sa...ya kisi Dil E Zaar Ka Fasanaa... Hum Darwesh, Sab ko Bardasht **
**Aur Dil Se Darguzar Karte Hain. Bismillah Kijye Huzoor !
Darwesh Saheb,
**Buhat buhat shukriya , ** hahahahahaha isi bardasht or sabar k sily main sidhy Janat main jao gy. Mara tu yehi khiyal hy wasy Intikhab main bhyjny ka irada hy, Apni shairi nahi, Abhi Ap k kathan imtehan ka waqat nahi aya.
**Meray Bhai Aur Bahnoon Yah Kia Ho Raha Hay ..... Main Iss Bahas Ko Bus Youn Sameetata Houn .....
Woh Meri Pahli Muhabat Woh Meri Pahli Shikasat
Phir To Paiman-e-Wafa So (100) Martaba Main Nay Kia
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Waisay Kiss Nay Kya Khoub Kaha Hay kuch Tabdeeli Kay Sath "Agar Ishq Na-Mukamil Rahay To Aadmi Sha'er (Poet) (Insaan) Aur Agar Mukamil Ho jay To Shohar Bun Jata Hay ... Jeetay Rahiye ...... **
Hahahahaha buhat khub sannan tu tumhrar ishq namukamal rha because you are a shair now;)
Faiz ny kia khub kha hy(Pta nahi Faiz ka hy k kisi or ka lagta Faiz ka hi hy)
Ham ny jis jis ko bhi chaha
Tery hijran main woh log
Aty jaty hoy musam thy
zmana tu tha