nadiya mein samandar behtay hain

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Re: nadiya mein samandar behtay hain

@Anwaar Qureshi

it seems a bit better in tukk bandi now… There is still room for improvement … you will be doing wonders after all this struggle you are going through Insha Allah… I see a big potential..

however, you should always mention about things that you borrow from other places… therefore, mention that the second line is not yours but borrowed.. it is perfectly OK to borrow and build the idea around as long as credit is given where it is due… This has been in practice by many big name of poetry as well..

welcome baQ..