NADAAN

S.786 · March 31, 2008, 1:59pm

sooraj ki shuaaoun se khata mang rahy hen…

** nadaan hen shulon se saba maang rahy hen..,**

** ham ko tu mitayaa hay issi saada dili nay…,**

** but khany men bethen hen khuda maang rahy hen.**

chacha_Ghalib · March 31, 2008, 9:35pm

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khoob hai :k:

laiken pehlay fiqray main lafz ‘khata’ ki samajh nahin aai?

S.786 · April 1, 2008, 1:24pm

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very sorry........ghata likhna tha........:(

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 1, 2008, 1:39pm

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v nice :)

immu · April 1, 2008, 5:55pm

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Bas Jan churani hai kia

Kuch comment karo k

wah sooraj se ghata kia khoob hai........

Ali_2 · April 2, 2008, 2:55pm

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buhat khoob S.786 :k:

Dushwari · April 14, 2008, 3:01am

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ice ashaar, s. 786

best,
Dushwari

S.786 · April 16, 2008, 11:39am

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nawaazish :)

Shab-e-Hijar · April 17, 2008, 6:58am

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very nice :k:

S.786 · April 18, 2008, 7:19pm

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thanks.............sh..hjr

mirage · April 18, 2008, 8:08pm

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good. for the flow of thought. Keep sharing.

Aliyish · April 19, 2008, 1:02pm

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Ek dard ko SahNey ki duah jab karchukay tu **
**Ushi dard ko Jeenay ki saaz maaNg rahay hain

(Aliyish)

S.786 · April 20, 2008, 12:14pm

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achha sher hay...thanks

Jhanjharewali · April 30, 2008, 2:51pm

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very nice, sweet poetry Safia ji

S.786 · May 2, 2008, 11:58am

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thans jh

Precious_Khan · May 2, 2008, 4:02pm

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Buhat Khoob ... Buhat Aala Qat'aa :~)

Thanx 4 sharing :~)

S.786 · May 3, 2008, 12:14pm

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nawazish