naa-tamaam safar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aksar kuch aisa hota hay k kisee aur ki kahi huee koi baat aap-beeti maaloom parti hay; Mohtarma Adaa Jaffri ki ye nazam "Paish Lafz’’ bhee kuch aisa hee asar rakhtee hay.

                                Wo kum-umree thee
                                Naadaani k din thay

                          K main nay waqt k sahir se
                             poocha thaa pata upna

                            Aur us jaado k lamhay nay
                           
                            Na'jaanay kia kaha mujh se
                            Na'jaanay kia suna main ne
                           
                          K main ub tuk safar main hoon
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Re: naa-tamaam safar

Wah.....loved it. Abstract poetry tends to have that effect.

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Re: naa-tamaam safar

aaww

:hinna:

kya huwa?

~Congratulations Sannan~
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Re: naa-tamaam safar

oh tu abhi taak nadaan haiN mancho g :p
nice sharing though :)

The Random Thread
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Re: naa-tamaam safar

kuch naadaniyaan kuch kisay na-tamaam safaron k :cb:

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Re: naa-tamaam safar

tay hor ki g; mustaqil-mijaaz jo thahraay, buchpun se puchpun tuk nadaani ka safar tay hum nay keeta :slight_smile:

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Re: naa-tamaam safar

tu abi taak ap bachpan main he bethay haiN pachpaN k kab hoN gaiN :p