Na Umeedin Kisi Se Rakhtey To Acha Hota

ajnabi_ladki · July 24, 2007, 6:30pm

**Na Umeedin Kisi Se Rakhtey To Acha Hota
Ietbar Na Kisi Pe Kartey To Acha Hota

Sabaq Deta Hai Zamana Yeh Auron Ko Giraney Ka
Sahara Na Kisi Ko Samjhtey To Acha Hota

Yaqeen Apni Kamyabi Ka Kisi Ko Kab Hota Hai
Taqdeer K Muqabil Na Hotey To Acha Hota

Sochtey They Ietbar Andha Ho Ga Dewawa Tum Per
Na Khuwaab Jagtey Main Dekhtey To Acha Hota

Na Chahtey Tum Kisi Ko Na Koi Tumheen Poojta
Na Achey Kisi Ko Lagtey To Acha Hota

Darya Mohabbat Ka Kab Koi Paar Karta Hai
Na Mohabbat Kisi Se Kartey To Acha Hota**

Prince_Ali · July 25, 2007, 4:00am

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wah! buhut khub :k:

uzma_dxb · July 25, 2007, 4:11am

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nice buhat achii poetry he

babri · July 25, 2007, 9:20am

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Nice.

being_lonely · July 25, 2007, 12:02pm

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**Na Chahtey Tum Kisi Ko Na Koi Tumheen Poojta
Na Achey Kisi Ko Lagtey To Acha Hota **

y is that so ?

btw nice sharing :k:

KinaRa · July 25, 2007, 1:43pm

Re: Na Umeedin Kisi Se Rakhtey To Acha Hota

na ye gazal parhtey acha hota
na he yuuN udaas hotey acha hota :(

Gud one :)

ajnabi_ladki · July 25, 2007, 5:40pm

Re: Na Umeedin Kisi Se Rakhtey To Acha Hota

thx everyone :)

[quote]
na ye gazal parhtey acha hota
na he yuuN udaas hotey acha hota

[/quote]

mein yahan sub ko udaas kar rahi hoon kya :$ sry abt it :$

btw nice written

Amal · July 25, 2007, 5:59pm

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You have nice collection ajnabi_ladki :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

ajnabi_ladki · July 25, 2007, 6:00pm

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Thank You :)

mhd.86 · July 25, 2007, 6:55pm

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very nice

alimani786 · July 25, 2007, 7:18pm

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wah very nice bohot khuubb...

Sheal · July 26, 2007, 3:15am

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very nice