na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

ayyazali12 · February 23, 2011, 5:07pm

**na tha kuch to KHuda tha, kuch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ?

…huaa jab GHam se yooN behis to GHam kya sar ke kaTne ka
…na hota gar juda tan se to zaanooN par dhaRa hota …

huee muddat ke ‘GHalib’ mar gaya par yaad aata hai
wo har ek baat pe kehana, ke yooN hota to kya hota ?**

UZ · February 23, 2011, 5:58pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

I like Ghalib’s poetry :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 23, 2011, 8:13pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

bohat achi ghazal hai…lekin Khudara ..aik ya 2 thread open kiya kijiye

KKF · February 23, 2011, 8:31pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

**han jii…zabardast…to ash’aar parh kar aapne kia sochaa? she’r #1 and #2 kaa kia jawaab hai? pahle she’r meN Ghalib kia hote? dusre she’r meN sar zaanioo par kis taraH hotaa?
**

me too!!!

haN G-e-T…achchhe ash’aar haiN…mere paas jo Ghaalib kaa nusKhaa hai us men yeh teen ash’aar “mutafarriqaat” yaa “mutafarriq ash’aar” kii surKhii ke taHet darj haiN kiuN k yeh Ghazal nahiiN hai…Ghazal meN kams e kam 5 ash’aar hote haiN jis meN ek matl’a aur ek maqt’a huaa kartaa hai…

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 23, 2011, 8:52pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

meray paas jo deewan-e-Ghalib hai uss maiN ghazal ki soorat hi likhi huwi hai...lagta hai made in china hai :(

ayyazali12 · February 23, 2011, 9:03pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

Yep Ghazal nai hai Ye
Ghalib ke ashaar hain jo unho ne kahe

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 23, 2011, 9:06pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

acha aap kah rahay haiN to sahi hi hoga

KKF · February 23, 2011, 9:09pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

achchhaa...made in Japan KhareedeN lol :D

ji, yehi maiN ne apnii post meN arz kiyaa thaa k yeh Ghaalib ke mutafarriq ash'aar haiN :D

ayyazali12 · February 23, 2011, 9:09pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

main to sahi hi kehta hn :P

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 23, 2011, 9:17pm

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

Sahi kah rahi hooN..ooper itna baRa likha hai Ghazal aaj ilm hua ye bhi naqli hai …
aap ki baat aaj bhi kisi ko samajh nahiN aai..mubarak.baad qabool kijiye

kabhi ghalat kah k dekhiye :-p

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:38am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

To party ho jaaye ;)

KKF · February 24, 2011, 5:43am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

u throw the party...the party i threw was kinda throw away :D

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:45am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

OK here is virtual party with ice chilled coke, some tikka ,kobabs, some desserts And in beautiful as here

KKF · February 24, 2011, 5:46am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

waah ji, waah…zabardast…who has been invited? faaKhti aur koyal ko to bulaayaa hai na? mujhe to samose chaahiyeN

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:47am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

haan naa party baghair samoson ke kaya maza dey gi yeh lein samosay and dahi bhallay and chaat Mujhe to khaana acha hi bara lagta hai

KKF · February 24, 2011, 5:49am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

thankoo…par faaKhtii ke baGhair mere gale se nivaala utregaa kaise?

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:50am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

To faakhti ko bulaa lo naa kis ney roka hai ;)

KKF · February 24, 2011, 5:54am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

nai nai...vo aise kahiiN nahiiN aatii jaatii...use jab tak official invitation nahiiN miltaa vo to par bhi nahiiN hilaatii :D

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:55am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

kaun hai woh faakhti us ko ham khud invitation bhejtay hain :D

KKF · February 24, 2011, 6:00am

Re: na tha kuch to KHuda tha,

hai vo goolar naake ke nokkaR pe jaamuN kaa jo peR hai uskii baayiiN shaakh ke daayiiN jaanib waalii aaKhirii shaaKh ke Tunni pe baiThtii hai…uskii nashisht ke auqaat haiN subHo 7-9, dopaher ko sotii hai, shaam 5-7…meeting by appointments ONLY!