saroo
September 20, 2005, 12:16pm
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Na shikaiteen na gila kare
Koi aisa shaks bhi hoa kare
Jo meray lye hi saja kare
Muj hi say baaten kya kare
Kabhi roay jaey wo be panah
*Kabhi be tahasha udas ho *
kabhi chupke chupke dabe kadam
meray peechay aa kar hansaa kare
Meri qurbateen meri chahateen
yaad kare jo qadam qadam
*main taweel safar main hoon agar *
Meri wapsi ki dua kare
taaraa
September 20, 2005, 6:42pm
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Re: Na shikaiteen na gila kare…
saroo:
Na shikaiteen na gila kare
Koi aisa shaks bhi hoa kare
Jo meray lye hi saja kare
Muj hi say baaten kya kare
Kabhi roay jaey wo be panah
Kabhi be tahasha * udas ho** *
kabhi chupke chupke dabe kadam
meray peechay aa kar hansaa kare
Meri qurbateen meri chahateen
yaad kare jo qadam qadam
*main taweel safar main hoon agar *
Meri wapsi ki dua kare
i guess it goes like this
kabhi roey jaye wo be-panahh
kabhi betahaasha hansa krey
and
main bohat taweel safar mein hoon
meri waapsi ki dua krey
don mind…correct me if i m wrong
saroo
September 21, 2005, 8:14am
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Re: Na shikaiteen na gila kare.......
I am not too sure but as far as i remember its right the way it is....where did u read it.
Re: Na shikaiteen na gila kare…
Waisaay this is my poetry…See my thread…tarasha from my book Tanhai
Re: Na shikaiteen na gila kare.......
Na shikaayatein, na gilaa karey
Koi aisa shakhs hua karey
Jo merey liye hee saja karey
Mujh hee sey Baatein kiya karey
Kabhi royey jaaey woh bepanaah
Kabhi be-tahaasha udaas ho
Kabhi chupkey chupkey dabey qadam
Merey peechay Aa kar, hansa karey
Meri qurbatein, meri chaahatein
Koi yaad kare qadam qadam
Mein taveel safar mein hoon agar
Meri waapsi ki Dua karey
From The Desk of Dr. Adnan Nadeem Dani (Ajnabi4ever)
saroo
September 21, 2005, 2:11pm
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Re: Na shikaiteen na gila kare…
I am sorry i never said i t was my poetry … anyway i cannot find the thread you mentioned… if you are talking about “From my book” that you posted then i had posted this before you .