Na Rung Mere Na Khwaab Mere

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 10, 2003, 12:46pm

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mae rung mein dekhti thee khushbo mein sochti thee
khuli jo ankhein tu saray manzur dhunk k us paar reh gay thay
na rang mere na khwaab mere
hoay tu bus azaab mere
na chand ratein, na phool batein, na neel subhein, na jheel shamein
wo mehrbaan saya daar badal
azaab ki rut mein choor ker mujh ko ja chuka tha
zameen ki taiz dhoop ankhoon mein chubh rahi thee*

Azad · August 10, 2003, 2:02pm

khoob

system · August 10, 2003, 3:39pm

Re: Na Rung Mere Na Khwaab Mere

ahaan, zabardast :k::k:

TajMahal · August 10, 2003, 6:22pm

wah bahut khoob HH !

Amarbail1 · August 10, 2003, 8:45pm

Wah… bahut aa’laa :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 10, 2003, 10:04pm

awesome:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 11, 2003, 3:34pm

thanks for liking Azad, viv, GKK, amarbail and Tajmehal

chand_chehra · August 11, 2003, 5:01pm

very nice :k:

Philanthrope · August 11, 2003, 5:03pm

Wah..

udaasaankhein · August 11, 2003, 5:24pm

:k:

_Passionate · August 11, 2003, 6:04pm

nice

Azad · August 12, 2003, 6:00am

aik baar phir say Wah

amirbilal · August 12, 2003, 6:05am

zabardast ji

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 12, 2003, 12:48pm

thanks for liking pals :~)

azad jee ap ki tabeeat tu theek hai

Azad · August 13, 2003, 6:37am

Yaar masla kia hay??? tareef bhi nahi kar saktay … phir say aap ki post pharri … phir say achi lagi … khair aap ko humari tareef achi nahi lagi .. to wapis kar dain.

shiza_zaffar · August 13, 2003, 6:40am

:nice 1 :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 13, 2003, 3:11pm

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nahi aisee tu koi baat nahi hai … kahann ap sirf humm likhte thay kahan tareef ker rahay hain

Daagh · August 13, 2003, 3:26pm

mashallah...bahot badhiya

read karne mein hi musical lag rahi hai peom...

***na chand ratein, na phool batein, na neel subhein, na jheel shamein

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 13, 2003, 4:38pm

^^ Thanks alot for liking Daagho uncle :~)