Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Na Jane Kin Adaon Se
Lubha Liya Gaya
Mujhe.
Qateel Mere Samney
Chura Liya Gaya
Mujhe.
Kabhi Jo Un Ke Jashn
Mein Siyahiyan Bikhar
Gaen To.
Roshni K Wastey Jala
Liya Gaya Mujhe.
Barah-E-Rast Rabta
Na Mujhse Tha Qabool
Unhain.
Likhwa K Khat Raqeb
Se Bula Liya Gaya
Mujhe.
Jab Un Ki Deed K Liye
Khara Tha Main
Kataar Me.
Na Jane Kyon Kataar
Se Hata Liya Gaya
Mujhe.
Mein Rondney Ki Chez
Tha Kisi K Paon Se
Magar.
Kabhi Kabhi To Zulf
Mein Saja Liya Gaya
Mujhe.
Poucha Gaya Wafa Hai
Kya.? Jawab Tha K
Zindagi.
Qateel Piyar Se Galey
Laga Liya Gaya Mujhe.

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

Barah-E-Rast Rabta
Na Mujhse Tha Qabool
Unhain.
Likhwa K Khat Raqeb
Se Bula Liya Gaya
Mujhe.

:lajawab:

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

ajaz ye ghazal ko nazm kiyun bana liya hai?

Agar ne nazm hai to pehli nazm hai, jis main shayar apna takallus bhi istemal main la raha hai :hehe:

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

ye ghazal ha paki sachi
ap spaces ki waja se keh rhy hain?

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

yes. nazm style main likhne ki waja se confusion hui

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

ok
aajkal mobile se use kr raha hun es leay formating ka sahi pata nae chalta.

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Re: Na Jane Kin Adaon Se Lubha Liya Gaya - Qateel

no problem :)