**~Na jaane~**

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Na jaane mujhe tum se mohabbat hai ya nahi
Tumhara har roz ka iqraar
Aur
Mera har roz ka inkaar
Hum donon ko takleef deta hai
Iss liay
Na tum mujh se iqraar kero
Aur na hi mein inkaar keroon
Toh shayad
Kuch arsa guzer jaane k baad
Mein yeh jaan sakoon
K mujhe tum se mohabbat hai ya nahi!!

I kno there’s a lot ov gurber in this poem but this is my first try so plzz dun read it as a proper poem…it’s jus a try…!!!

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Re: ~Na jaane~

idea acha hay :k: naya hay hummmm yeh kehna mushkil hay.

common problem
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Re: ~Na jaane~

Guzar Jaanay k Baad … Iss k baad aap ne achanak he end kardia hai isau yahan se kuch naya mor denay ki koshish karein !

overall simple wordings n start is too good :shabash: keep trying :shireen:

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Re: ~Na jaane~

@ sonia nazam master we have sonia if u r reading this post will u please do sumthing with this poem u have permission to do :)