na jaanay usay kyaa huaa
vo nafrat karnay laga
vo mohabbat karna bhool gaya
aur doosray ratsay pe chal diya
galfehmi main par kar
meri mohabbat ko bhool gaya
moujhay akelay chor gaya
is k bavjood bhi
usko patta na tha
main uska rah dekhti rehi
uske sapnay dekhti rehi
uska intzaar karto rehi
**
kab tak?
main yeh kaisay bataoon
abhi bhi uska intzaar hai
vo meray dil main bas chuka hai
usko bhoolna ab mushkil hai
**
Note; Inspired by an English poem of Dushwari,
“Someone did not know”.
Re: na jaanay usay kyaa huaa
nice explanation, rkopra.
it is incorrect.
do you explain poems subjectively like this all the time?
anyway.
best,
Dushwari
Re: na jaanay usay kyaa huaa
nice explanation, rkopra. it is incorrect. do you explain poems subjectively like this all the time?
anyway.
best,
Dushwari
It's a new poem. I was inspired to write this after I read your poem. It is not a reflection on what happened to anybody in the past and is not directed to anybody in any way.
Re: na jaanay usay kyaa huaa
^ rkopra, i apprediate you saying this "It is not a reflection on what happened to anybody in the past and is not directed to anybody in any way.".
best,
Dushwari
Re: na jaanay usay kyaa huaa
^ rkopra, i apprediate you saying this "It is not a reflection on what happened to anybody in the past and is not directed to anybody in any way.".
best, Dushwari
You're welcome.