My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Mahru June 28, 2005, 12:58am 1

here it goes hope you all like it…

Arz karti hoon…(dedicated to my deceased grandfather, I miss him veyr much)

Yeh Maut ka libaada aurh kar kahan chale ho tum
Hazaroon baras jeenay ka wada kar ke aye thay

Air aur

Ansuoon se likh rahi hoon tehreer tere naam mei
Dil mera rota rahe paighaam tujhe milta rahe

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 28, 2005, 4:13am 2

Re: My very own shayarii …I started when I was 17

Very Nice

Welcome to GS Poetry

Azad June 28, 2005, 7:24am 3

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

welcome

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 28, 2005, 12:06pm 4

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

Very nice Mahru, keep it up:-)

Mahru June 28, 2005, 12:30pm 5

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

Thank you for welcoming me, everyone! I hope, I can keep up with you all:) You all seem like very good shayars!

Amal June 28, 2005, 1:40pm 6

Re: My very own shayarii …I started when I was 17

Welcome aboard Mahru

Mahru June 28, 2005, 1:49pm 7

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

here is another one it is not mine but i like it:

Nahi Nigha mei manzil tau justajoo hi sahee
Nahi wisaal mayeasar tau Arzoo hi sahee

HeArT_HaCKeR June 28, 2005, 1:53pm 8

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

Boht khoob Mahruu :)

system June 29, 2005, 9:36pm 9

Re: My very own shayarii ....I started when I was 17

*Yeh maut ka libaaRda orh kar kahaN chaley ho tum
HazaroN baras jeeney ka wada kar key aaye they *

Wish we could stop people from going... :( Great ashaar Mahru... keep writing!