My very own for the first time in poetry

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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NO! it is not non-serious:)

khuaab kee dunyaa say nikal kar jo dekha deeda-e-beena nay
khuaab sirf khuaab he reh gaye seenoun main machaltay

tubb yeh inkishaaf-e-raaz-e-zindagi mujh par huvaa Anwaar
khul jaatay asraar-e-zindagi, gar khuaab ko zindagi naa kehtay
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Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

nice one:k:…but where is the rest of it?

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Re: Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

opps:( dun have it…:stuck_out_tongue:

sar khujaaing

abhi itna hee huvaa hay itnee mushkiloun say tau:crying:…

abb himmat nahin hay kay dimmagh par bojh daaloon :smiley: (waisay bhee khud tau main ladaa hoon bojh say:D)

aur waisay bhee yeh tau khud ba khud aajaatay hain kissi moqay aur haalaat kay zer-e-asar.. mera kiaa qusoor?:frowning:

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Re: Re: Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

very true:k::slight_smile:

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wah gadha ji very nice :k:
keep it up :slight_smile:

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nice try keep it up…:):k:

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cool

cool cool good job yo

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Wowwww … :k:

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Nice, Keep it up:)

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:k: yeah my guess was rite:hehe:

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:slight_smile:

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Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Gadha: *
NO! it is not non-serious:)

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khuaab kee dunyaa say nikal kar jo dekha deeda-e-beena nay
khuaab sirf khuaab he reh gaye seenoun main machaltay

tubb yeh inkishaaf-e-raaz-e-zindagi mujh par huvaa Anwaar
khul jaatay asraar-e-zindagi, gar khuaab ko zindagi naa kehtay
*

[/QUOTE]

achi hai magar kuch kuch samajh aai :D

Aap ka Naam Anwar hai? :p

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Re: Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dania_2000: *

achi hai magar kuch kuch samajh aai :D

Aap ka Naam Anwar hai? :p
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why u interested:p

aur haan samajhnay kee aadat daal lo:p

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Buhat achhi kaawish he :k: … thanks for sharing

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:crying:..khwaab:crying:

wesey very nice…liked it:k:

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Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

Bohat-khooB

Keep them coming
:k:

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wah ji wah :)

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oye hoye sciense ne itni tarraqi karli k gadhoon par bhi amad hone lagi :hehe: :hehe:

waisy:k:

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bohttttttttttttt nice shaier likhei hei aap nei lekin kanjoosi kar die is mei bhieh buri baaht :nono: next time 4 zrur likhnei hei warna mei nei delete kar dena hei kuch samjh aii :stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: Re: Re: My very own for the first time in poetry

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*Originally posted by Gadha: *

why u interested:p

aur haan samajhnay kee aadat daal lo:p
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what do u mean?