Salaam guys,I love poetry …and sometimes I write what comes to mind.So I’d like to share a little poem I wrote…I know its not that good…but anyway here it is :
barish
Mai barish main chal rahi hun,
ansoon arahe hain.
Par apne ghum ko iss duniya sai chupanah hai.
Ye barish mere ansoon chupa leh ghi…
kaash… ye barish mere ansoon mujh sai bhi chupa leti…
its nice M_Q…
keep it up :~)
Awwwwwww thanks yaar.
Deep and touchy …:k:
thank you… 
Wonderful keep it up...
Acha laga ya jan kar ka aap ko barish aur ansoon main faraq nazar tu aa raha hai.... yahan tu..............
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Wonderful keep it up...
Acha laga ya jan kar ka aap ko barish aur ansoon main faraq nazar tu aa raha hai.... yahan tu..............
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App ne pari hai.awww ty dilsay jee.
Wase hows the idea behind it.
Aur ye app kia keh rahe hain,wahan kia hua?
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*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
App ne pari hai.awww ty dilsay jee.
Wase hows the idea behind it.
Aur ye app kia keh rahe hain,wahan kia hua?
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it is really a good idea behind it... aur wasay yaha bohat achay baa zook log hain un say behi pooch loo...
aww ty,par your opinion matters na,you’re such a great poet masha Allah.
ahem yeh kis ke lliye hai;)
anyways its beautiful:hug::k:
keep it up and thanks:p
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kash k aisa hota ke brish ansoo chupa leti … 
good one acha likha hai aap ne plz continue and write some more lines :k:
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Very well M_Q keep it up
aap main to achay khasay jaraseem mowjood hain
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Buhat khoob MQ :k:
Ye mere liye hai Gkk.
ty jaanu 
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Thank you Umer.I have some others…I just dont feel too comfortable sharing them.
but I’ll see.
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thank you capri bhoolne wale.
thanks.
:)
nice
really:halo:
anyways welcome always:kiss:
wonderfull…:k:
ty
thanks:)