my very first poem at gupshup

hope u guys like it

Missing you

Y am i waiting, i dunt understand
all this pain i cannot withstand

Y am i crying, i cant fight
all these tears i can no more hide

with out you i feel lifeless
being awake but completely senseless

my broken soul longing for what remains
while trying to erase the memories of pain

how can i be so foolish, i regret
but the painful tears, i cannot shed

i look for you everywhere I go
i think about you in everything I do

my scream is getting louder and louder
but u cannot see the misery behind my laughter

if u will hold my hand, i will never let you go
I promise my love will always follow you

not a bad start:flower1:

and welcome:)

Re: my very first poem at gupshup

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nice :k:

& welcome to gupshup.. :slight_smile:

welcome… Nice work :k:

Nice try :k: