My Son's First Poem:)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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The lonely flower

A lonely, sad flower
all alone by its self
how lonely it is.

Note: It’s his original work I thought should be in Shar-o-gupshup not intikhab:)

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Thats cool ...................... MashaAllah creative thoughts ..........

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how old is he..??

its very cute.. :rose:

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mashallah

Is it wrong ???? KISSING....
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:mash:
its Nice!!!

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:mash: nice writing

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:mash:

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:D mashAllah

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MashaAllah, Cute poem. Thanks 4 sharing:D 100win post mubarak hu. :eek: 100 posts per star wow! How:konfused:

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Thanks:)

Thanks; he is 8 :mash:

Thank you all friends!

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Thank you and yes I have some repu now stars are based upon quality:wink: not quantity:D

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lol goodnews aap bhi khhob ho. kahein nazar na lag jay 4 sitaron ko

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^^^ Hahaha Azad thanks Allah nazry ba dsy bachay magar dykhu na 10,000 sy oper posts ker ky mily hain abhi tu mehsoos kia ky mery posts 9,000 something they ky achanak raton rat (night o nitgh)reduce ho giy to 7,999:( ab kia karin shaid dar rahy thy woh log ky smiley ka mutalba na ker don aisa koi masla nahi ham smiley ky baghyr bhi smile sakty hain :D

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my God.
mash-Allah. if this is your son's poem now, this is brilliant. how old is he?
best,
Dushwari

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Yes this is his poem:) and he is eight years old MAshaAllah
I asked him hey son do you feel that much loneliness and sad??? he said," Mom this is just a poem and that lonely flower is not me just a flower I saw.":D

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mashAllah nice:k:

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A Poet in the making :d:k:

That is so cute MashaAllah, I literally laughed and smiled :slight_smile:

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:hmmm:Looks like this is Ur first post in poetry section at least in my life time here:D

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Thanks bheegiyaad:)

:smiley: Thanks well he is an artist too like you I will upload his drawings too someday

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very nice....

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^KAASH^