My poem

main urdu main nahi likhti but i would still liek to share one of my poem..

Life instructs lesson-
some learned,
some unlearned.

My mortal half could never breathe life into your broken heart.

Stars I once wished upon,
Return to me undone

Well nice it would also be good if you start writing in urdu....

thanks anyway for sharing it

not bad :)

:)...

:konfused:

thnx for sharing:)

thanks u guys

Very nice..

Keep it up.. :)