Re: My poem
Hum kbhi Mehfil-e-guftugu na hotay
tum jo gr arzu-e-dil na hotay
socha kabhi kiya mangte dua main hum
tum jo gr dil me basay na hotay
aalam-e-zabat ke zuban p quful!!
kash ishara-e-nzr tum parh chuky hotay!!
now thats the version I corrected for you!! dono main difference dekh lo 
I could make it more clear but i wanted to keep your matter there!!
good luck for your future, You have skills though :k: